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Tears heart Apart -------------------------- Paul Callus ~ 9/7/2015 Contest: One Footle Sponsor: Judy Konos Placed 1st http://static7.bigstockphoto.com/thumbs/5/7/5/small2/57598487.jpg

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James Tate

Date: 7/27/2015 10:42:00 AM

Talk about brevity, you show it here. How about this: Fleas Adam had'em Thanks for your comments on my Mars.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/27/2015 11:31:00 AM

Thank you, James! I'm smiling at your witty footle....perfect:) As an afterthought...Fleas: Said Eve ... Must leave! ~ Regards // paul

Elaine George

Date: 7/24/2015 5:06:00 PM

Yes!!! I have experienced it. A few words that tells it all. Elaine

Paul Callus
Date: 7/25/2015 5:36:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Elaine! Betrayal is a cowardly thing to do...sorry you had to experience it:( Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/11/2015 4:16:00 PM

aww sad footle ;-(

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 4:32:00 PM

Both our entries ended on a sad note, Casarah, but still managed to fly high:) hugs // paul

David Mohn

Date: 7/10/2015 10:15:00 PM

Hi Paul, I like this dark footle with the interesting word spacing...works well - thanks for the kind comments on mine as well

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 3:40:00 PM

Thank you for your nice feedback, David. Glad you enjoyed. All the best. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 7/10/2015 2:01:00 PM

Big fool....so cruel...congrats Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 3:41:00 PM

Thank you, Tim; enjoyed the extended footle:) // paul

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 7/10/2015 12:49:00 PM

Wonderful piece of art, Paul. Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Ndaba. Just been reading some of your poems...very much impressed! All the best. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2015 1:53:00 AM

PAUL, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FOOTLE WIN........ LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 3:57:00 PM

Many thanks, Linda. Here's a footle for you: "Lovely & Passionate" ~ Kinda...Linda :) hugs // paul

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/10/2015 12:42:00 AM

I knew this would be a high flyer, Paul, well done. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Viv, especially for the faith you had in this footle! Liked your entry, too. All the best. // paul

Skat A

Date: 7/10/2015 12:24:00 AM

Paul, Awesome footle. Love ~SKAT~

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 4:12:00 PM

Thank you, Skat; will catch up with you:) hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/9/2015 10:13:00 PM

Sad but true, Paul. Congrats on your win!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2015 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Kim! Was pleased to find you rubbing shoulders with me on the top podium:) hugs // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/9/2015 9:37:00 PM

Paul, congrats on your fantastic win! Love, Kim

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 4:09:00 PM

You are very generous, Kim:) Thank you! A lovely weekend to you. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2015 9:36:00 PM

wow, that was very well done, Paul. Congrats.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2015 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea; pleased to share top spot with you! // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/9/2015 9:27:00 PM

Paul, I had a feeling this would place well. Congratulations on your great win:-)Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 4:05:00 PM

Your support is much appreciated, Alexis!! Thank you...your vibes serve you well:) Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2015 5:10:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2015 5:39:00 PM

I scanned the winners list and was delighted to see the contest was finalised:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 5:38:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!! For a moment I thought that my comment had not gone through, then realized that you had come back again with congrats!! You're always first with breaking news:) hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/9/2015 12:17:00 PM

Hi....powerful footle, dear. Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Eileen; your 'good luck' wishes will truly bring me luck:) hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/9/2015 7:40:00 AM

Paul, this is a heartfelt footle.Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Alexis! Beware of blind dates:) All the best. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2015 3:35:00 AM

aww a sad footle:-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 5:33:00 PM

Lately my poems keep swinging from sad to happy and vice versa, Jan! Thank you for always being there to lend an ear:) hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2015 1:51:00 AM

Excellent Paul! I hope things are going well for you now. Blessings, Connie

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 5:30:00 PM

Your 'excellent' comment is much appreciated, Connie. Life is much brighter, thank you:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/9/2015 1:07:00 AM

Paul, two lines but it bangs!!! hugs!!!! ~Olive ELoisa =")

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 5:23:00 PM

Glad you heard it bang, Olive_eloi:)) Thank you!! hugs // paul

Diane Christian

Date: 7/9/2015 12:17:00 AM

good luck with the contest torn apart broken heart I understand where your footles coming from all the best

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 5:20:00 PM

Hi Diane! I always used to think that I could trust friends, then I was betrayed once, and fortunately that opened my eyes; I learned to tread with added attention! I regard that episode with a positive eye:) Thank you for reading and commenting. All the best. // paul

Diane Christian

Date: 7/9/2015 12:15:00 AM

I can relate to that well put