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Betrayal

Tears heart

      Apart


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Paul Callus ~ 9/7/2015
Contest: One Footle
Sponsor: Judy Konos
Placed 1st

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James Tate

July 27, 2015 at 10:42 AM

Talk about brevity, you show it here. How about this: Fleas Adam had'em Thanks for your comments on my Mars.

Paul Callus

July 27, 2015 at 11:31 AM

Thank you, James! I'm smiling at your witty footle....perfect:) As an afterthought...Fleas: Said Eve ... Must leave! ~ Regards // paul

Elaine George

July 24, 2015 at 5:06 PM

Yes!!! I have experienced it. A few words that tells it all. Elaine

Paul Callus

July 25, 2015 at 5:36 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Elaine! Betrayal is a cowardly thing to do...sorry you had to experience it:( Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Casarah Nance

July 11, 2015 at 4:16 PM

aww sad footle ;-(

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 4:32 PM

Both our entries ended on a sad note, Casarah, but still managed to fly high:) hugs // paul

David Mohn

July 10, 2015 at 10:15 PM

Hi Paul, I like this dark footle with the interesting word spacing...works well - thanks for the kind comments on mine as well

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 3:40 PM

Thank you for your nice feedback, David. Glad you enjoyed. All the best. // paul

Tim Smith

July 10, 2015 at 2:01 PM

Big fool....so cruel...congrats Paul

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 3:41 PM

Thank you, Tim; enjoyed the extended footle:) // paul

Ndaba Sibanda

July 10, 2015 at 12:49 PM

Wonderful piece of art, Paul. Congratulations!

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 4:29 PM

Thank you, Ndaba. Just been reading some of your poems...very much impressed! All the best. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

July 10, 2015 at 1:53 AM

PAUL, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FOOTLE WIN........ LINDA

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 3:57 PM

Many thanks, Linda. Here's a footle for you: "Lovely & Passionate" ~ Kinda...Linda :) hugs // paul

Viv Wigley

July 10, 2015 at 12:42 AM

I knew this would be a high flyer, Paul, well done. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 4:11 PM

Thank you, Viv, especially for the faith you had in this footle! Liked your entry, too. All the best. // paul

Skat A

July 10, 2015 at 12:24 AM

Paul, Awesome footle. Love ~SKAT~

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 4:12 PM

Thank you, Skat; will catch up with you:) hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

July 9, 2015 at 10:13 PM

Sad but true, Paul. Congrats on your win!

Paul Callus

July 10, 2015 at 3:08 PM

Thank you Kim! Was pleased to find you rubbing shoulders with me on the top podium:) hugs // paul

Kim Merryman

July 9, 2015 at 9:37 PM

Paul, congrats on your fantastic win! Love, Kim

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 4:09 PM

You are very generous, Kim:) Thank you! A lovely weekend to you. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 9, 2015 at 9:36 PM

wow, that was very well done, Paul. Congrats.

Paul Callus

July 10, 2015 at 3:02 PM

Thank you, Andrea; pleased to share top spot with you! // paul

Alexis Y.

July 9, 2015 at 9:27 PM

Paul, I had a feeling this would place well. Congratulations on your great win:-)Alexis

Paul Callus

July 11, 2015 at 4:05 PM

Your support is much appreciated, Alexis!! Thank you...your vibes serve you well:) Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Jan Allison

July 9, 2015 at 5:10 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

July 9, 2015 at 5:39 PM

I scanned the winners list and was delighted to see the contest was finalised:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

July 9, 2015 at 5:38 PM

Thank you, Jan!! For a moment I thought that my comment had not gone through, then realized that you had come back again with congrats!! You're always first with breaking news:) hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

July 9, 2015 at 12:17 PM

Hi....powerful footle, dear. Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus

July 9, 2015 at 5:27 PM

Thank you Eileen; your 'good luck' wishes will truly bring me luck:) hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

July 9, 2015 at 7:40 AM

Paul, this is a heartfelt footle.Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Paul Callus

July 9, 2015 at 5:25 PM

Thank you Alexis! Beware of blind dates:) All the best. // paul

Jan Allison

July 9, 2015 at 3:35 AM

aww a sad footle:-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

July 9, 2015 at 5:33 PM

Lately my poems keep swinging from sad to happy and vice versa, Jan! Thank you for always being there to lend an ear:) hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

July 9, 2015 at 1:51 AM

Excellent Paul! I hope things are going well for you now. Blessings, Connie

Paul Callus

July 9, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Your 'excellent' comment is much appreciated, Connie. Life is much brighter, thank you:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 9, 2015 at 1:07 AM

Paul, two lines but it bangs!!! hugs!!!! ~Olive ELoisa =")

Paul Callus

July 9, 2015 at 5:23 PM

Glad you heard it bang, Olive_eloi:)) Thank you!! hugs // paul

Diane Christian

July 9, 2015 at 12:17 AM

good luck with the contest torn apart broken heart I understand where your footles coming from all the best

Paul Callus

July 9, 2015 at 5:20 PM

Hi Diane! I always used to think that I could trust friends, then I was betrayed once, and fortunately that opened my eyes; I learned to tread with added attention! I regard that episode with a positive eye:) Thank you for reading and commenting. All the best. // paul

Diane Christian

July 9, 2015 at 12:15 AM

I can relate to that well put

Betrayal

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