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Best For Last

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Best For Last We bare our souls capriciously exposed, O'er a chronology gift long ago, Humbly traipse fortuitous hearts composed, Traverse fragmented biannual flow. Oblique drifts of periodical moons, Guide our latter half just as earned before, Nature flights of triangular formed loons, As seasonal exchange caused them to soar. From color-filled picturesque scenery, To monochromatic impassiveness, Passage midst creation and synergy, Intimates harmonious timeliness. Clock fades crucial seconds tempts to outlast, As time wane merging thoughts holding our past. 2019 December 14 *3rd Place* Your best sonnet July-December 2019 ~~John Hamilton *Honorable Mention* STRAND SPECIAL 10,any form ,any theme ~~Brian Strand

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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 12/30/2019 11:38:00 AM
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Beautiful William! Such a great esoteric flow in your intrinsic understanding of the nature of things. So happy I read it. Lonna
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/30/2019 10:02:00 PM
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My heartfelt thanks Lonna wonderfully rendered generous thoughts~@wk
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2019 5:38:00 PM
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So well written William, I enjoyed your unique word pairings and phraseology, congrats on a win in my contest!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/30/2019 10:00:00 PM
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Thanks, John for my placement in your inspiring contest, I am surprised to have made the cut for that I am grateful~@wk
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2019 9:46:00 PM
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This truly may be all of our best sonnets, William!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/14/2019 11:33:00 PM
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My extended courtesies for your endearing words Caren ~ Aloha always William

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