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Best Birthday Ever

She’s got happy feet, kicking moist sand in the air Running in a zig zag line like a high-flying kite Nyla is calypso dancing around, with her heart floating off the ground Hearing the trailing away voices of “you’re it ...” “No I’m not, you’re it” doesn’t bother her one bit This just might be the best day of her young life That’s her opinion, she would proudly tell you It’s birthday year seven And she’s having so much fun, at her beach birthday party Colorful bathing suit cannonballs, hurtling into the swimming pool So many kids clamoring, wanting to ride ... waiting to get all wet on the giant water slide Cool fun on a hot day So many popsicle-colored tongues dripping with childish carefree chattering ... melting all their popsicle inhibitions away Such warm, innocuous happiness on tropical display Time seems to fly by so fast when you’re having this much fun On birthday year seven, Nyla feels like she just turned eleven Kids having so much frosty fun are working up a grownup size appetite this hot day There’s a lot of ice cream that needs to get ate, and she sees Momma putting a slice of chocolate cake on everybody’s plate And her Daddy’s taking pictures of those who pass by Telling everybody he’s got something in his eye Momma gives him a teardrop kiss as he wipes them dry Then Nyla looks up at the sky, and thank God for the perfect sunny weather And suddenly her best friend is standing beside her, giggling with so much joy Seeing her favorite friend smiling on this special day, it feels like nothing could be better Until her closest sister-friend whispers in her ear: This is the best birthday party ever!

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Date: 7/14/2017 4:33:00 AM
Good Morning Freddie. This is beautiful and endearing. We should all be children and yes we should all be seven. Happy Feet exactly. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful morning and day. Well done entirely and completely.
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:06:00 AM
This poem is so filled with happiness, fun and just so special Freddie ! I agree with Chris, how could one not smile seeing their joy! This poem portrays it to perfection.
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:02:00 AM
What a wonderful and smile producing poem. Happy children how could one not smile watching the joy on their faces. Popsicle-colored tongues...I liked that line a lot.
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