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Hands.oiled heels of palms 
pulse pushing upward 
thumbs kneading on both sides of spine
you lay face down
In warmth
Feeling them spread 
To ripple across shoulder blades
Then fingers clutch and knead
in almost individual circles
crisscrossing and working down
To small of back
The process is repeated 
as soft music thrums
in constant rhythm
How else to tell you?

The knife spreads the colours
In concentric circular patterns
Interacting with the darkness
Creating depths stretched canvas cannot
Causing three or is it four points of infinity?
Making the watcher's eyes
crisscross and work in
the flows of creation
How else to tell you ?

Hands clench as tightly closed eyes
search through twisting colours
The chest contracts as shoulders tighten
Then all falls loose
Space bends time 
Tunnels untwist in glass clear mirrored 
Relaxation
Freed and soaring through finity
reaching to caress through convoluted tendrils
Of Hope and Tenderness
How else to tell you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/28/2008 8:19:00 PM
thank you for reading my poem and for your comment. But man did not make up heaven there is a heaven and a hell. and glory will be when the saved go to heaven have a nice day. this was a nice piece of poetry you wrote here well written.
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Date: 9/28/2008 6:08:00 AM
Poetry is to the mind as massage is to the body! Pretty relaxing read.
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Date: 9/27/2008 4:01:00 PM
Well that sounds like a very relaxing massage to me - Great job on this poem Donald - God Bless
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Date: 9/27/2008 3:06:00 PM
I enjoy art expressing another art. Good.
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