Beseeching Mary

Within the weighty door, weary souls went; as did I as a child of eight, to the silent sentience within… Upon the stoutest oak they sat, worrying beads. “Hail Mary, full of grace, the Lord is with thee,” The penitants, the prayerfull, the pitiful, rock. The innocent observations of childhood. Inward stares, upcaste eyes, open hearts, rock. “Blessed art thou amongst women and blessed is the fruit of thy womb…” Beside masterpieces of goldleaf raised plaster pain, they walk, worrying, burnished beads; mindful of His journey “…Jesus.” Each has a path they walk, weighted weary souls. Yet, they remember in their hearts His path and it’s toll. The child in me remembers this in wonder. Besceeching Mother Mary to lift their weight, their toll. The Child in me knows Mary.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/20/2010 10:22:00 AM
As i read you latest works and you past works, they are all so meaningful. The depth of your thoughts mixed with your expressive nature - a powerful combination. Again, I enjoy your writing. Thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/11/2010 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner poem in this contest, Deb
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Date: 9/10/2010 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest Deb. Love Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:19:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Catie's contest... a magnificent piece and wonderful win to enjoy tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 12:37:00 PM
Very nice Deborah. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:26:00 AM
Oh wow....I do love those last six words so much......as children we are quite often in awe and urgent in our wonderment....I sometimes wish we could keep that amazement alive, without it ever fading. Wonderful poetry, Debbie! Congrats!
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:06:00 AM
Your poem reads like a lovely prayer, Deborah. Congratulations on your success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:51:00 AM
A baroque masterpiece full of invitations for theological arguments. Wondrous description in the write, peace and love
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:46:00 AM
St. Anne would be proud of this one. It seems our faith is stronger when the times are harsher. Vince
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Date: 2/18/2009 1:54:00 PM
You have painted this scene so beautifully. It is easy to lose yourself amongst these words steeped in such wonderful visuals. You've been busy! Well worth the effort! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/18/2009 5:30:00 AM
Memories of a little heathen in a Polish Catholic convent Chapel walking stations of the cross.
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Date: 2/18/2009 5:24:00 AM
Debra you are such an amazing writer. I read your work and I am truly impress with you. Your language reeks beauty and you always take me on a journey of some sort. Excellently done. Chris.
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