Bereft

And ever above,
clouds of sorrow
assemble in thunderous ranks:
a surfeit of threat
and gloom.

And ever below,
unhappy footsteps
surrender rhythm
to unyielding pavement—
against a gray and endless plain.

Who but a fool
dreams that sorrow
can be bartered
for kindness and love?
The beggared soul abides.

And, in his eyes,
the ashen world
grows, blurs and overflows
to run down his cheeks.
And it rains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Rockwell Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Beautiful, mournful, evocative — everything a great poem should be! Thank you for sharing your talent! Cindi
Peterson Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Remarkable words for an earlier poem of mine that got featured. Thanks for enhancing my day with your words.
Virden Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Touched, tearful, and adding you to my favorites. Oh what treasures I have found in the Soup!
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 2:28 PM
- Touching and well written, Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Peterson Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 11:36 PM
Anne Lise. Thanks again very much for your kind remarks and support of my poetry. Keeps me working! Mark
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 8:40 PM
This is an excellent description of sorrow. Love the first stanza. Bravo!
Peterson Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 5:10 PM
Thanks, Jon. I'm beginning to think that I should end most of my poems after the first stanza! Mark
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