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Bereavement

I numbly step aside, acceding to her prior riight, knowing full well that she will smile again. But I? The others too, must have their chance to mourn. I see their tears and wonder why. They were not there to hear his first strong cry. I clasp their hands and listen to their words. "God be with you." "Time heals all wounds." I hear the lie. Resentment clogs my throat. Can God command the blood to flow through my still beating heart? My stone cold heart, can it but die? They murmur their good-byes. At last I am alone to find my pathway back to life and God, without my son. To try, to try. For Paula's Feel the Feeling contest Won HM

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Date: 5/29/2010 9:40:00 PM
this one truly does have great feeling as in "feel the feeling" Congrats to you at least for the HM. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's " Feel The Feelings" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:42:00 AM
Try the monorhyme form now, Joyce. I just opened a mini contest for 20 entries. Hope you'll give it a shot! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:35:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write... enjoy this special honor dear friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:51:00 AM
written from the soul...very nice
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Date: 5/25/2010 3:04:00 AM
It's very touching poem. I enjoyed it, Joyce.
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:49:00 PM
Your perspective is right on, Joyce. People who don't even know the deceased well assure us that time will help us heal. I'm truly sorry for your loss and found your poem to be very moving. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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