Bereaved

“Though grief burdens one, it may lessen in time. But like an ember it keeps smoldering and from time to time, may grow into flames, burning inside”
                                                                                 ~By Poet

Nothing remains
of a life lived together
in a world, once so full of beauty

Nothing remains		
of those lovely evenings,
we rambled along the quiet country paths

Nothing remains of the twilight dusks
we listened to the invisible choir
singing for us in the descending dark

Nothing remains
of the whirlwind of love
when we rocked in gyrating motion

Nothing remains 
of those blissful nights
we slept in each other’s warm embrace

Nothing remains
of the sweat we shed
to make a nest n’ feed our fledglings

Nothing remains
of the time tarried in anticipation
of our birdies returning to our nest

Nothing remains 
of the times we dreamt 
of magic kingdoms beyond our hills

Nothing remains 
when existence was but a lovely dream
and from joy to joy uninterrupted we flew

Nothing remains
after the lid of the coffin shut
and my Love wheeled on a hearse!

How quickly life slid off its track
to immeasurable distances n’ spaces
landing me in an abyssal pit

How a winter of benumbing snow
has nudged its way
into every crack and cranny of my life

Now, I live a phantom under this roof
with awful memories barging in 
like the marauding thieves!

How I search in vain
for those footprints, you have left
in the weed grown paths of my life

How I long to wash away
my grief in a surge of tears
trickling down my eyes 

But Alas!
I cannot cry
My eyes are dry!

Jan.29.2023

~ Placed First~

Writing Challenge- B-Word Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bangalee Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:34 PM
it's excellent poetic writing on B challenge poem; congrats for first placement
La France Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Valsa, such a sadly beautiful poem, and quote, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
George Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Thank you so much Constance for picking up my poem for a win. Glad for the opportunity given !
Buhagiar Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Returning your congratulations on your first placement.
Jayasankar Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 4:54 AM
"Nothing remains"... you have expressed "bereavement" so well and I loved your quote too dear Valsa... Congratulations on your win in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
Edmonds  Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 7:54 PM
A wonderful memorial poem Valsa. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/story/quote and ending. You said it all. Have a blessed day..........
Miller Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Absolutely wonderful, so moving, and so very well written; congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 9:44 AM
wow, those words really inspired you. I bet this one scores really high, Valsa.
Pandit Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Nothing but memories. Highly emotive write, Valsa. A poignant theme that resonates throughout. Best to you.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Suburb poem on lost love. we grieve for a long time and memories never leave us. Brilliant. Best for a win.
Poet Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 6:36 AM
A poem that is wonderfully crafted and reflects your distinctive writing skills. Valsa. The recurrence of the refrain throughout the poem adds another degree of agony. "Nothing remains after the lid of the coffin shut and my Love wheeled on a hearse!" using imagery to an incredible degree while maintaining a very greater standard of diction is a plus as well. Good luck with the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 6:29 AM
They say time heals but often that's not always the case, like your quote says, the embers are still glowing and flares up at certain events when you really miss the presence of a loved one. Well written Valsa and good luck in the contest. Tom
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