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April National Poetry Month Poetry Contest
Sponsor Daniel Henry Rogers
8th Place

Bequeathed The Weight of The World

We tote the burdens of old of new
  ‘neath big-blue’s unabated leer
    the pressures that build and brew 
      the world it bruises, its rain, a salty tear
          Day by day the ocean washes with waves
           the weight we bear we’ve lost at sea                                                     
           The Earth Moon’s despair She braves
       when endless seeds of courage we weave, 
    via lanterns, the pathway endless and vast
 Still dusky are the sky clouds that grieve,
Earth's magnetic field's spin pulls us past 
Lucky flames shone from within, lights
 Upon duress Earth Angels’ spirits rise
     and stars are the healers in broken nights
       Angel breath sprinkles dreams God size
         when the weight of the world feels like heat of embers
          The Sunrays purify as does the ocean salt water 
           The Sunset a resting slumber in silent chambers     
            From wounds that whisper of lament we cauter
           the weight of the world we’ll feel burden no longer
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Bob Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 9:31 PM
Congratulations on your win! It is well deserved!
Anaya Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 3:26 PM
Tyvm, Uncle Bob
Carmack Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 8:13 PM
This is one of my favorites that I have read among Daniel's finalists. Congratulations on your placement.
Anaya Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 3:27 PM
Ty for letting me know, it means a lot!
Jones Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 5:34 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest!
Anaya Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 9:49 AM
Wow! a placement out of 100! That's quite a surprise, KJ, Tyvm for your support always! May blessings
Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 10:37 PM
your work is so human, just beautiful, Anaya <3
Anaya Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 9:47 AM
Tyvm, Paige, appreciate your support always <3
Rodgers Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 5:12 PM
Dear Anaya, I think your words feel like someone carrying a whole sky on their shoulders and still finding a way to lift a lantern. I kept hearing the soft clatter of courage in your lines with that sense of women standing upright even when the world leans too hard on them. Such a tenderness in the way you braid Earth, moon, flame, and saltwater together, as if the elements themselves are trying to shoulder a little of the burden. Excellent read! Blessings Daniel
Anaya Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 9:46 AM
Daniel, your genuine support is most appreciated! I'm very grateful & humbly thankful for the placement in your contest. May blessings
Narain Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 12:08 PM
Nice poem celebrating National poetry month.
Anaya Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 9:44 AM
April's National poetry month, May's winner! Ty, Jay!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 10:14 AM
A wonderful write/picture for the April contest. The weight of the world is on many these days. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
Anaya Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 9:44 AM
Your support is appreciated, Paula! May blessings
Rolland Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 1:06 AM
beautiful and inspiring poem, we have to get out from business to be aware, awaken, great poetry, thanks
Anaya Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 9:44 AM
It's national poetry month, hope i brought justice to it! Hah, tyvm, Yann
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