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Bent Not Broken

I fight tempestuous winds, earth ablaze in feverish sky, leaning flesh into fury stem bends giving the tempest an offering – petal by petal I lose my phantom limbs and mark trails with tears wisps of fragility beautify blue skies tinged heave and hurl fantasizing of light my lily-white peace what doesn’t kill me feeds my soul pours from my pen my past's fury - storms bluster between mire and soiled sky a wildflower's spirit bends fearless Written 3/1/17 *75 words total

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Date: 3/15/2017 11:05:00 AM
Poetically poignant, purposeful and perfect! 7, My best, chuck
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with such an amazing free verse, Rhonda:) a 7:)
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:19:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:04:00 AM
Wow, terrific write Rhonda, congratulations...
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Date: 3/10/2017 7:20:00 PM
Congrats, Rhonda! A beautiful ending
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Date: 3/10/2017 7:03:00 PM
My poem is thrilled to share first place with your poem. Congratulations! Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/10/2017 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful! Congrats on your win, Rhonda.
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Date: 3/10/2017 9:11:00 AM
just perfect Rhonda! This is exactly what I was searching for in this contest...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/9/2017 8:36:00 AM
Yes, read the unedited version first. Great job of pulling out this shorter version. Love them both. A Fav.
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Date: 3/3/2017 10:34:00 PM
Thrilling piece...beautifully written. Thank you for uplifting my thoughts today.
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Date: 3/2/2017 9:45:00 AM
Really nicely done Rhonda. I can feel the emotions this poem expresses easily. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/2/2017 8:40:00 AM
- How lovely, Rhonda ... "what does not kill me - feeds pours from my pen" - Good luck in the contest - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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