Beneath the Waves

Buried - corroded and torn
Beneath icy waves that continuously wash and toss 
Never to rise to the once grandeur
Of music, the dance, the laughter 
The high life I once paraded 
I have sunk into the gloom of dark watery depths 

I look longingly above to the once splendid light of day
That now just flickers teasingly into my watery grave
Once it was glittering chandeliers and cabin lights
I was once titanic, buoyant on the high seas 
Resilient and proud at the tossing of high waves-

Now through hollow, battered, buckled and bent walls
I house fish instead of the splendid defiant people I once knew
I know I will never rise to the beauty of light again
To the splendor of sailing, slicing freely through aquamarine waves
And the setting sun visions that turn waves to gold across a border-less horizon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/10/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Brenda. Love, Carol
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 4/10/2012 5:13:00 PM
Thank you Carol : )
Date: 4/6/2012 6:22:00 PM
wowowow, is this also for Titanic contest? if so, you made one awesome creation for both contests. Big congrats in the deep sea contest.
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 4/10/2012 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Andrea- re Titanic I don't think it fits the outline for the contest : )
Date: 4/6/2012 5:00:00 AM
Congratulatins Brenda a worthy winner here xx
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 4/10/2012 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Mandy : )
Date: 4/6/2012 1:38:00 AM
congrats Brenda on a wonderful win for this rare beauty poetry luv.. happy easter blessings too..
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 4/10/2012 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Linda : )
Date: 4/5/2012 4:15:00 PM
A good creative piece of writing!! Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 4/10/2012 5:13:00 PM
Thank you : )
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