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Beneath the Wanning Moon

I close my eyes, as time drifts away, upon a tune of yesterday to hear the songs of glory sung, beneath the wanning moon He stood there with a finger aiming at the sky, naming each and every star* The vineyard winds soft as an easy meadow, joined the morning glories as they were closing for a fortnight. With the taste of wine still on his lips he whistled through the gap of his front teeth, while the chickadees slept, beneath their sheltered wings... Many years have come and gone still I recall my father dearly, back in days when the sun was young and the moon was a pearl, waxed in luminescent blues. If I close my eyes, I can still recall that blessed summer, the one when I believed that father, knew it all.

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Date: 12/18/2022 3:36:00 PM
What a delightful, beautifully descriptive poem! Thank you for the images.
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Date: 12/1/2022 6:15:00 AM
Wonderfully reminiscing in memories--a beautiful poem, Vienna.
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Date: 12/1/2022 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay, I have so many fond memories of my dad, this being the most brilliant. He knew the names of each star,
Date: 12/1/2022 6:06:00 AM
You write so beautifully Rose. A captivating heartfelt poem…..loved it! Debx
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Date: 12/1/2022 10:07:00 AM
Grateful for your presence here dear Deb, have a blessed day xo
Date: 12/1/2022 3:38:00 AM
This is so nice! Well written and special :)
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Date: 12/1/2022 4:47:00 AM
thanks, dear Heidi ,

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