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Beneath the Tranquil

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Beneath the warm and tranquil surface, lurks a monster, a huge shark relentless and fierce; cruel, he swims in circles waiting to attack, an innocent, oblivious, poet gliding. A real poet-eater with great razor sharp words, beware of this savage destroyer of poets; he is heartless and brutal maybe a bull shark, because he likes warmth and attacks poems. He is a coward who lurks beneath the surface, if he should come close while you are a-drifting by; just give him a sharp wack on his ugly big snout, send him fleeing- a coward always runs away. ______________________________ December 15, 2018 Poetry/Verse/Beneath the Tranquil Copyright Protected, ID 18-1094-613-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/18/2018 6:26:00 PM

I like your upbeat and cute take, it was entertaining and reassuring. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2018 7:53:00 AM

CayCay thank you for your kind words, I love poetry soup and I believe that there are more good people in the soup than bad, the bad can be spotted easily and have a way of disappearing, one just has to wait for their fall from grace and departure ~

Constance La France

Date: 12/18/2018 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Robert, Marc, Silent, ML, Sun, Jan and Heidi for visiting my poem with those great comments ~

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/16/2018 11:32:00 AM

Love this creative poem my dear friend. Poetry's massive oceans all have saints and monsters. I try to avoid the monsters and sincerely praise the kind-hearted, artistic and inspiring saints that pen to our delights such wondrously creative , magnificently beautiful and rich inspiring verse! A fav, this inspiring piece you have gifted.

Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:36:00 PM

Thanks for the Fav!

Marc Acrich

Date: 12/16/2018 10:13:00 AM

I like it, I have a silly poem that is called there is piranha in my bathtub, all about what is lurking underneath our skin

Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:35:00 PM

:-)

Silent One

Date: 12/16/2018 5:58:00 AM

Tell me about it Constance.. Sadly the case, there are some sharks who pretend to be saints... You did a great poem though.. Good luck in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:35:00 PM

~.~

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/15/2018 7:47:00 PM

Now I'm terrified..."Poet Eaters"; I will retire for the night with one eye open and my ears stretched to hear windows and doors being opened; beneath my bed in easy reach...my old baseball bat; if the monster comes...he's going to have one huge headache!

Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:34:00 PM

:-)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/15/2018 6:10:00 PM

The poet-eaters never have attacked me. My poetry is too mediocre, I guess. They are green eyed monsters, and I would be flattered, but would not pay them any mind.

Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:34:00 PM

:-)