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The doomsday clock 2 minutes to midnight. 1st place


Sponsored by: Emile Pinet 
Slide 11 of 11: In Hiroshima, on August 6, church bells ring at 8:15 am, the exact moment the bomb dropped. That begins a day of remembranceceremoniesthat culminates in the hauntingly beautifulToro Nagashifestival, where hundreds of lanterns are floated down the Motoyasu River, in front of the Atomic Bomb Dome.Toro Nagashi began in Tokyo in 1946, andHiroshimapicked it up the following year. The lanterns are a tribute to those who perished in the bombing and an assurance that Hiroshima and the world will never forget what happened there on August 6, 1945.

Beneath the Sword of Damocles

As we nurse our nuclear nightmares
in a not to certain day
We are conjoined in common phobia
of madness or foul play.

In '45 the gadget was born.
Collective minds formed this creation. 
Where medicine was the safe place 
for containing its radiation.

Little children of the Fifties
hid beneath the classroom desks
closed their eyes and dreamt of mushrooms
saying, "This is just a test."

Beneath the Sword of Damocles,
possession had by all
Who’ll be the first to get one off
and spread the fireball?

Everyone wants a power sword
to wave above the next,
a challenge to the strongest,
though nothing will be left.

The chance exists to burst the sun
and hurl it into space.
A few will long for greenery,
the world that was this place.

Speak with Japan's hibakusha
of burnt flesh, white light, black rain.
Listen to their tales of horror
feel the hatred in their pain.

With a wave of a finger
falls the sword of megatons.
Ask yourself will the survivors
be the truly lucky ones?


American President John F. Kennedy compared the omnipresent threat of nuclear annihilation to a sword of Damocles hanging over the people of the world.   

The survivors of the Hiroshima and Nagasaki atomic bombings are known in Japan as hibakusha. There are about 48,000 of them living in Nagasaki Prefecture, and about 83,000 in Hiroshima.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/6/2025 10:34:00 AM
Dear Janis, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your potent and thought-provoking poem. Your last two lines provide a chilling finale. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/29/2025 5:46:00 PM
Hi Janis. I was one of those little desk divers in the Fifties. We were told to “duck and cover!” Your poem is very sobering, especially since the Bulletin of Atomic Scientists in 2025 moved the doomsday clock to 89 seconds to midnight. Things have gotten worse since you wrote this in 2018. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 11 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 12 has already started.
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Date: 8/30/2025 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Mark. Glad you remember. We must be close to the same age. Yes, I will keep running the long distance, with hope, stamina and inspiration.
Date: 2/27/2018 6:43:00 AM
So good! I see why you won! Congratulations, Janis!
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:37:00 PM
So powerfully penned Janis congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:16:00 PM
Congrats
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:00:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:53:00 AM
So much to think about in your very powerful poem, Janis. When will humans learn...Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:31:00 AM
Big congratulations Janis on your well deserved win. Tom.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:55:00 AM
Congratuations on your well deserved win
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations Janis! Your amazing poem "Beneath the Sword of Damocles", has placed first in my PoetrySoup contest, well done! Emile.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:16:00 AM
Back with congrats on your powerful poem and well deserved win, Janis.
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:32:00 AM
-.... and what have people learned .... nothing ... a scary thought, Janes - really a great write ... thought provoking - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2018 9:07:00 PM
Well written, Janis. Hard to believe we are going through the same worries again.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/4/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks, Line.
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Date: 2/4/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks, Line.
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