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Slide 11 of 11: In Hiroshima, on August 6, church bells ring at 8:15 am, the exact moment the bomb dropped. That begins a day of remembranceceremoniesthat culminates in the hauntingly beautifulToro Nagashifestival, where hundreds of lanterns are floated down the Motoyasu River, in front of the Atomic Bomb Dome.Toro Nagashi began in Tokyo in 1946, andHiroshimapicked it up the following year. The lanterns are a tribute to those who perished in the bombing and an assurance that Hiroshima and the world will never forget what happened there on August 6, 1945.

Beneath the Sword of Damocles As we nurse our nuclear nightmares in a not to certain day We are conjoined in common phobia of madness or foul play. Little children of the Fifties hid beneath the classroom desks closed their eyes and dreamt of mushrooms saying, "This is just a test." Beneath the Sword of Damocles, possession had by all Who’ll be the first to get one off and spread the fireball? Everyone wants a power sword to wave above the next, a challenge to the strongest, though nothing will be left. The chance exists to burst the sun and hurl it in to space. A few will long for greenery, the world that was this place. Speak with Japan's hibakusha of burnt flesh, white light, black rain. Listen to their tales of horror feel the hatred in their pain. With a wave of a finger falls the sword of megatons. Ask yourself will the survivors be the truly lucky ones? The American President John F. Kennedy compared the omnipresent threat of nuclear annihilation to a sword of Damocles hanging over the people of the world. The survivors of the Hiroshima and Nagasaki atomic bombings are known in Japan as hibakusha. There are about 48,000 of them living in Nagasaki Prefecture, and about 83,000 in Hiroshima.

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Date: 2/27/2018 6:43:00 AM
So good! I see why you won! Congratulations, Janis!
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:37:00 PM
So powerfully penned Janis congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:16:00 PM
Congrats
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:00:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:53:00 AM
So much to think about in your very powerful poem, Janis. When will humans learn...Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:31:00 AM
Big congratulations Janis on your well deserved win. Tom.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:55:00 AM
Congratuations on your well deserved win
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations Janis! Your amazing poem "Beneath the Sword of Damocles", has placed first in my PoetrySoup contest, well done! Emile.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:16:00 AM
Back with congrats on your powerful poem and well deserved win, Janis.
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:32:00 AM
-.... and what have people learned .... nothing ... a scary thought, Janes - really a great write ... thought provoking - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2018 9:07:00 PM
Well written, Janis. Hard to believe we are going through the same worries again.
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Date: 2/4/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks, Line.
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Date: 2/4/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks, Line.

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