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Beneath the Heavens

Milky-Way celestial garb Oceans white, floating above Shining cheer of moonlit sky Heavenly smile, so divine Twinkles on incandescent arc Flirting winks of teasing stars Dancing merrily on constellations Exuberance of meteor storms Whispers of amorous night Aspirations of budding romance Humming joy on cereus flower Passions of nocturnal moths Kissing lips of fragrant adores Embrace of enamored arms Strumming chords of dulcet harp Concert of two loving hearts June 13, 2020 Placed 2nd: Brian's Select F Contest

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Valsa George

Date: 12/28/2021 10:18:00 PM

When two hearts strum in love, a melodious concert is produced... and we enjoy its melody and the elements reverberate it. Beautiful poem Victor !

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/10/2020 5:00:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Vijay. My favorite lines "Strumming chords of dulcet harp Concert of two loving hearts" :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/18/2020 9:53:00 PM

Floating in love. :) Seems you are. Above all the stars and whispers of the night. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2020 8:47:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate your comments, as always, Brandy.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 4:18:00 AM

This is a really enchanting mystical verse my friend. You are an outstanding poet. This is a fave for me :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2020 8:47:00 AM

Much appreciate, Aditi--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/15/2020 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I just took a fun ride on your Milky-Way. Enjoy your win and day.............

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2020 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/14/2020 1:23:00 AM

Wonderful imagery Vijay.. Beautifully penned..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2020 8:20:00 AM

Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/13/2020 9:16:00 PM

Ahhh Vijay, a little journey through the galaxy. Stunning imagery my friend! I loved your romantic ending! xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2020 8:20:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/13/2020 11:34:00 AM

A lot nice line here...this one made me smile, "Aspirations of budding romance" I can imagine the restless feelings involved...Well done

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:31:00 PM

So very kind of you Arturo--many thanks--much appreciate.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/13/2020 10:52:00 AM

Lovely lines, especially 'twinkles on incandescent arc' and 'strumming chords of dulcet harp' - magical!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:30:00 PM

Glad to read your comments, Michelle--much appreciate--many thanks.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/13/2020 10:45:00 AM

The Stars shine with you, my friend...a lovely write Vijay...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:30:00 PM

So very kind of you my friend--many thanks, WW--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/13/2020 9:41:00 AM

Hi Vijay ' Strumming chords of dulcet harp - concert of two loving hearts' what else would one need in life than to achieve a heartfelt love with another who feels the same way! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:29:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate your cheerful comments, Jennifer.