Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

Beneath the Heavens

Milky-Way celestial garb
Oceans white, floating above

Shining cheer of moonlit sky
Heavenly smile, so divine

Twinkles on incandescent arc
Flirting winks of teasing stars

Dancing merrily on constellations
Exuberance of meteor storms

Whispers of amorous night 
Aspirations of budding romance

Humming joy on cereus flower
Passions of nocturnal moths

Kissing lips of fragrant adores
Embrace of enamored arms

Strumming chords of dulcet harp
Concert of two loving hearts

June 13, 2020
Placed 2nd: Brian's Select F Contest

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Valsa George December 28, 2021 at 10:18 PM When two hearts strum in love, a melodious concert is produced... and we enjoy its melody and the elements reverberate it. Beautiful poem Victor !

Angela Crabtree November 10, 2020 at 5:00 PM A beautiful poem, Vijay. My favorite lines "Strumming chords of dulcet harp Concert of two loving hearts" :)

Brandy Nicole June 18, 2020 at 9:53 PM Floating in love. :) Seems you are. Above all the stars and whispers of the night. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 19, 2020 at 8:47 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate your comments, as always, Brandy.

Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 4:18 AM This is a really enchanting mystical verse my friend. You are an outstanding poet. This is a fave for me :) Vijay Pandit June 19, 2020 at 8:47 AM Much appreciate, Aditi--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Paula Goldsmith June 15, 2020 at 12:55 PM Congratulations on your win. I just took a fun ride on your Milky-Way. Enjoy your win and day............. Vijay Pandit June 15, 2020 at 3:17 PM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 1:23 AM Wonderful imagery Vijay.. Beautifully penned.. Vijay Pandit June 14, 2020 at 8:20 AM Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong June 13, 2020 at 9:16 PM Ahhh Vijay, a little journey through the galaxy. Stunning imagery my friend! I loved your romantic ending! xxoo Vijay Pandit June 14, 2020 at 8:20 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael June 13, 2020 at 11:34 AM A lot nice line here...this one made me smile, "Aspirations of budding romance" I can imagine the restless feelings involved...Well done Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:31 PM So very kind of you Arturo--many thanks--much appreciate.

Michelle Faulkner June 13, 2020 at 10:52 AM Lovely lines, especially 'twinkles on incandescent arc' and 'strumming chords of dulcet harp' - magical! Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:30 PM Glad to read your comments, Michelle--much appreciate--many thanks.

Winged Warrior June 13, 2020 at 10:45 AM The Stars shine with you, my friend...a lovely write Vijay...best wishes...^WW^ :o) Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:30 PM So very kind of you my friend--many thanks, WW--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos June 13, 2020 at 9:41 AM Hi Vijay ' Strumming chords of dulcet harp - concert of two loving hearts' what else would one need in life than to achieve a heartfelt love with another who feels the same way! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:29 PM Thank you my friend--much appreciate your cheerful comments, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2020 at 8:08 AM Such a romantic scene you've created Vijay, well Written. If it's for a contest, good luck. Enjoy your weekend Tom Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:28 PM Thank you Tom--much appreciate your comments, as always.

Janice Canerdy June 13, 2020 at 8:08 AM Another vividly descriptive, LOVELY, appealing blend of nature and romance, Vijay. Janice Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:27 PM Thank you Janice for your kind feedback--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 13, 2020 at 7:27 AM You have painted the entire universe in verses divine my friend, Vijay! Blessings! Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:27 PM Delighted by your vote of approval my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.