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Beneath the Faraway Stars

The tiniest of silver labrets amid the corner of her beautiful elixic lips, so full ~ With a small diamond shining and glittering, upon her perfectly poised nose These dangling rubies waltzing from beneath her precious meridian lobes, with A pendant lavaliere; sapient sapphire, wrapped within the finest of gold Wearing a white silk dress, cut low, to bare her feeding and full tanned breast Bronzed reflections of paradise, her soft summers skin Gently brushing, upon my wanting and very own ~ While as barefoot we dance, atop the radiant golden sands Slowly, beckoned beneath the swaying shimmering stars As into each others eyes we then fall; into the essence of it all This beauty, while as the waves they so gently play, Beethovens Overtures of serenities warm embrace; two hearts and two souls, entwined Deeply within the mirrors rapturous notes of, a compositions love song ~ Taking one anothers hands gently; fingers interlaced amid this light Making our way towards the stairs their rising, beyond the whispering shore Candles, burning and joyfully waiting, for consecrations breath of life Consummations rose petals of fragrance, atop this brilliant feathered bed of bright As slowly I lie her back, to capture forever the pulsing of these beating hearts Two souls, melting and melding amid loves destined moment; cherished Honey dripping its sweetened nectars; impassioned cries of resoundings Within this, utopias, everlasting kiss ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beneath, these faraway stars....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/4/2010 10:35:00 AM
Such a lovely sketch of beauty and love which kept the reader spell bound in the beauty of your description and love. Great write my friend and a very outstanding one. It’s a Gem in words. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra......John Rhinem.
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Date: 9/4/2010 4:55:00 AM
Such passionate poetry John. The images you draw her are mesmerizingly beautiful. Thank you for your lovely comments. It indeed has been a long time. I hope all is well where you are =) Take good care my friend. Always, Farah
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Date: 8/31/2010 1:03:00 PM
My friend have not seen any new writes from you...hope you find your inspiration today!!
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Date: 8/29/2010 5:14:00 PM
Such breathtaking and beautiful poetry, John, it just makes me weep that you put it as I Do not know category, and I have asked this same question before, and you have answered before~~ but nevermind, it is remarkable writing~~dear heart
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Date: 8/29/2010 4:25:00 PM
For a moment I thought you were in love with me! John, Ha Ha. Thank you for your romantic response to my peom, "YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND". Comments to: 'Beneath the Farway Stars"!! It is romantic and exquisite, and beautiful Congradtulations on that poetry. Gloria
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:37:00 PM
Just once again beautifull thank you for my remarks John just lovelly they are ..i am in a writing mood just added two more not so sad as they were for other people that wanted them ...but yes my new ones are more of the love that is in side of me sarah x
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:47:00 PM
Once again, you have got to be the nicest person I know~Thank you so much for the light you bring~what part of the world do you dwell.??? I see you've been featured, great job, congrats to you ~~And may God guide your paths and fill you with loving inspiration.Your friend--^Rick
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:17:00 AM
HI JOHN, GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:12:00 AM
Hello, John! congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/25/2010 8:16:00 PM
cool title, gorgeous poem again! John!
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Date: 8/24/2010 6:55:00 PM
truly beautiful and a captivating write full of passion and love that you mix amidst imagery that allows the reader to envision her beauty so very well,,and I do want to Thank You for all the wonderful comments that you have placed upon my words and the charisma to which they were expressed,,Thank You again and Blessings...Cecil
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Date: 8/24/2010 1:56:00 PM
I finished the easy cheesy poem if you care to read the finished part. Let me know if it is cheesy and needs revising.
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:38:00 AM
Very beautiful poem ,very romantic..Hope your love read this gem. .Cong. On being featured. (Pls pray for Caroline D)
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Date: 8/24/2010 3:28:00 AM
Very beautiful poetry John, this goes to my favs. Elegant, exquisite, dreamy and so romantic...swoon ;) ~ Sharon :) Thanks for your lovely comments.
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Date: 8/23/2010 12:34:00 PM
This was so beautifull John ,,A READER COULD GET SWEPT AWAY WITH THIS X Sarah
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Date: 8/23/2010 12:31:00 PM
smail x
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John R. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 7:02:00 AM
No surprise that this beauty is one of the featured poems on PS this week! My congratulations! Talk about getting high on a poem, this will do it! And it's just 10:00 a.m.!Love, audrey
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:02:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem this week! well written! Where are you from John? the usa? I am a Georgia Girl.
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Date: 8/22/2010 11:15:00 PM
Incredible wording as I have always found with your writes that brings out fabulous imagery and in this case, quite sensual! You are quite a writer! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:21:00 PM
Definitely a favorite tonight!! Sorry, I've been away, hence the silence. I was sure I did let you know though. Anyway, regarding this, as usual you never disappoint! Beautiful, incredible imagery. I'll go read the others and try to catch up:). Always love to you, Audrey
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:10:00 PM
bronzed reflections of paradise, her soft summers skin.. This stuck out as special to me, and your poetry seems slightly above outstanding. cheers to illusive life-jess
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:45:00 AM
I believe your heart is a canvas of passion, John, because this is a magnificent poem born from deep feelings of love. Kisses, Emily
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:30:00 AM
Im knocked over with this beautiful write... you are a talent here on Soup...Thank you so much for that wonderful comment... Michael
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:25:00 PM
Your comments are so nice!!what a beautiful spirit you are!!!God bless you John~Rick
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