Beneath the Faraway Stars

The tiniest of silver labrets amid the corner of her beautiful elixic lips, so full ~

With a small diamond shining and glittering, upon her perfectly poised nose

These dangling rubies waltzing from beneath her precious meridian lobes, with

A pendant lavaliere; sapient sapphire, wrapped within the finest of gold 

Wearing a white silk dress, cut low, to bare her feeding and full tanned breast

Bronzed reflections of paradise, her soft summers skin 

Gently brushing, upon my wanting and very own ~

While as barefoot we dance, atop the radiant golden sands

Slowly, beckoned beneath the swaying shimmering stars

As into each others eyes we then fall; into the essence of it all

This beauty, while as the waves they so gently play, Beethovens 

Overtures of serenities warm embrace; two hearts and two souls, entwined

Deeply within the mirrors rapturous notes of, a compositions love song ~ 

Taking one anothers hands gently; fingers interlaced amid this light 

Making our way towards the stairs their rising, beyond the whispering shore 

Candles, burning and joyfully waiting, for consecrations breath of life

Consummations rose petals of fragrance, atop this brilliant feathered bed of bright

As slowly I lie her back, to capture forever the pulsing of these beating hearts 

Two souls, melting and melding amid loves destined moment; cherished 

Honey dripping its sweetened nectars; impassioned cries of resoundings 

Within this, utopias, everlasting kiss ~    

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Beneath, these faraway stars....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kapoor Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Such a lovely sketch of beauty and love which kept the reader spell bound in the beauty of your description and love. Great write my friend and a very outstanding one. It’s a Gem in words. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra......John Rhinem.
Chamma Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Such passionate poetry John. The images you draw her are mesmerizingly beautiful. Thank you for your lovely comments. It indeed has been a long time. I hope all is well where you are =) Take good care my friend. Always, Farah
Culverhouse Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 1:03 PM
My friend have not seen any new writes from you...hope you find your inspiration today!!
La France Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Such breathtaking and beautiful poetry, John, it just makes me weep that you put it as I Do not know category, and I have asked this same question before, and you have answered before~~ but nevermind, it is remarkable writing~~dear heart
Benton Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 4:25 PM
For a moment I thought you were in love with me! John, Ha Ha. Thank you for your romantic response to my peom, "YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND". Comments to: 'Beneath the Farway Stars"!! It is romantic and exquisite, and beautiful Congradtulations on that poetry. Gloria
Hales Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Just once again beautifull thank you for my remarks John just lovelly they are ..i am in a writing mood just added two more not so sad as they were for other people that wanted them ...but yes my new ones are more of the love that is in side of me sarah x
A  Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 8:17 AM
HI JOHN, GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~
A   Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Hello, John! congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.
Goff Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 8:16 PM
cool title, gorgeous poem again! John!
Hickman Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 6:55 PM
truly beautiful and a captivating write full of passion and love that you mix amidst imagery that allows the reader to envision her beauty so very well,,and I do want to Thank You for all the wonderful comments that you have placed upon my words and the charisma to which they were expressed,,Thank You again and Blessings...Cecil
Culverhouse Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 1:56 PM
I finished the easy cheesy poem if you care to read the finished part. Let me know if it is cheesy and needs revising.
Bloomsfield Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Very beautiful poem ,very romantic..Hope your love read this gem. .Cong. On being featured. (Pls pray for Caroline D)
Tideswell Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 3:28 AM
Very beautiful poetry John, this goes to my favs. Elegant, exquisite, dreamy and so romantic...swoon ;) ~ Sharon :) Thanks for your lovely comments.
Hales Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 12:34 PM
This was so beautifull John ,,A READER COULD GET SWEPT AWAY WITH THIS X Sarah
Hales Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 12:31 PM
smail x
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John R. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 7:02 AM
No surprise that this beauty is one of the featured poems on PS this week! My congratulations! Talk about getting high on a poem, this will do it! And it's just 10:00 a.m.!Love, audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 6:02 AM
congrats on the featured poem this week! well written! Where are you from John? the usa? I am a Georgia Girl.
Delacroix Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 11:15 PM
Incredible wording as I have always found with your writes that brings out fabulous imagery and in this case, quite sensual! You are quite a writer! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Haick Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:21 PM
Definitely a favorite tonight!! Sorry, I've been away, hence the silence. I was sure I did let you know though. Anyway, regarding this, as usual you never disappoint! Beautiful, incredible imagery. I'll go read the others and try to catch up:). Always love to you, Audrey
Saltzer Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 4:10 PM
bronzed reflections of paradise, her soft summers skin.. This stuck out as special to me, and your poetry seems slightly above outstanding. cheers to illusive life-jess
R Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:45 AM
I believe your heart is a canvas of passion, John, because this is a magnificent poem born from deep feelings of love. Kisses, Emily
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August 22, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Im knocked over with this beautiful write... you are a talent here on Soup...Thank you so much for that wonderful comment... Michael
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August 21, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Thank you for your always sweet and welcome comments, John. Love, Carolyn
Chachere Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 6:04 PM
also, the young boy is important in the the girls future.and yes she is in me, as you could already feel in my writes.. and, my comments come from my heart, and spirit.i never will just write something plain..or what the normal person would say. i express my thoughts & reviews fully to a poets poems..until i feel that what my heart felt about it is all written. & thats very sweet of you John, you have a wonderful & cunning spirit within you, yourself, and much more! Always&Forever
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