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Beneath Peaceful Turquoised Waters I was under aqua waters, sinking and searching for peace. Hoping to find silence, from worldly, negative speech! To let the cool aqueous, blue waves, soothe me. Remind me to think not of me, but of all the other thees. The multitudonous, wondrous, gleaming mirrored, fish eyes, Studying me, with awed wisdom and great wondrous surmise. I wished to remain beneath the cool, magic essence of the sea. The earth, I once knew, so beseiged with rank hypocrisy.. On earth, good morphed into evil, and even now evil was good? I chose to llive with my fish soul-brothers, but ah, if only, if only, I could! 7/11/2024

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Date: 7/17/2024 12:32:00 AM
Wow! You give an incredible new imagery with the sea! Your breathtaking views of the truth of our world and your inspiring soul! A master of beauty and depth and truth. Well done my friend! Well done! Love Chantelle
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Date: 7/17/2024 7:19:00 AM
Hi, Chantelle! I do like this creationn.it was fuun to writte. As a Pisces, I can relate to aquatic beauty..wish I could live beneath the sea.! Thank you. Pangir…
Date: 7/15/2024 11:20:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Oh would it be nice to live under the water with the fish? We would swim every day looking at the beauty around us. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2024 10:17:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Yes I thought so. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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Date: 7/16/2024 12:24:00 AM
I lol. Great pomt, desr ome! Pangie hugs, ))
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2024 3:19:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, our cats would not like the water. They only like water to drink. Thank you. Get your rest. Hugs. xxx
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Date: 7/15/2024 11:51:00 AM
Hello, Friend and Fellow,Fish! I always wanted to go Deep Sea Diving! But ~ as you say, better to live under the sea and savor beauty as a fish…But…our cats…?? What of them?? LOL! May you have a marvelous day!! Hugs, Pangie XXX
Date: 7/15/2024 2:11:00 AM
To live under the sea, with mermaids all around and Neptune in command. Very innovative poem.
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Date: 7/15/2024 2:28:00 AM
Victor, thank you. I have not been around much ~ thus, you have not gotten a visit, sorry! Wanted to thank you for your exceptional poetry. Most oustanding also is your humility! You dont come here demanding trophies and a throne. That is so impressive.. hope to return when I can! Hugs, Pangie xxx
Date: 7/13/2024 9:48:00 AM
I too wish I could live under the sea in the tranquil cool water, very imaginative write~
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Date: 7/14/2024 12:36:00 PM
Happy Sunday! Join me deep in tropical waters… Fish cant write poetry just live in the moment of divine beauty. I loved your comment and bless you for the visiit! Hugs, Pangie Under the Sea!
Date: 7/12/2024 8:00:00 PM
I wonder if people will ever live under the ocean. At least, food will be at arm's length. This poem shows great innovation.
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Date: 7/14/2024 12:30:00 PM
Hey Hilda! Apologies for being late in responding to you and others. True, yummy things to eat under the sea. Glad you you liked this aquatic creation for sure. Hugs, Pisces Pangie
Date: 7/12/2024 8:37:00 AM
Another peaceful calming “take you away into the deep ocean” poem…..loved the last one and love this one!! Are you sure you are not a fish my friend haha!! If not perhaps in your next lifetime Ha! Lovely poem! Debx
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Date: 7/14/2024 12:22:00 PM
Right on, Deb! Actually, I am a turquoise fish! LOL. Being a Pisces, and from our mails. You know I have those qualities! I get your honesty and appreciation in all your comments and I have not known you very long… In my next lifetime, uI hope my soul is with the Master of the Universe. In friendship’s warm glow, Pangiexx
Date: 7/11/2024 1:11:00 PM
Lovely- liked your references to fishes, you know, I went fishing a few times, and put them back, lol
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Date: 7/11/2024 2:31:00 PM
Golly Paige!! You and I are alike! I ner liked fishing.. I call it murder by Hook.it is so vicious. I mentined that in my piem, “ I Remebber! Pangie
Date: 7/11/2024 1:03:00 PM
Love the use of color in this poem. They are so intertwined and creative.
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Date: 7/11/2024 2:27:00 PM
Turquose is my birthstone))) Great comment. Pangie~

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