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- Beneath Massive Wings -

Reflects sadly
                                 impure air braved the mind -
                                   Make us spiritually clean
                                 have a quiet mind and listen -
                                   remove weeds by the root


                                                  ~


                                            08.02.2023
                                     Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 12:44 PM
A greener garden grows from cleansing teardrops, powerful articulation, Anne-Lise, Aloha William
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 1:33 PM
- Thank you very much, William :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 12:01 PM
A lovely/beautiful write. Wish I had your picture. Weeds are bad for the garden and for the mind. Pull them out. Have a blessed day..................
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 12:21 PM
- Thanks for dropping by and your comment, Paula - hugs :)
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Oh wow! I love this! A Fave for me. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 12:18 PM
- Oh ... Wow for you ... thank you so much, Heidi :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 11:05 AM
Only by removing the weeds will it enable us to flower and bloom. Good luck in the contest Anne. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 12:20 PM
- Remove the weeds ... then there will be a better place for the flowers ... - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Lovely! Such words uttered sincerely, enfold us in protective wings, opening sky for greater blessed journey. Did you do the art? Joe.
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:56 AM
- Picture is "borrowed" - not mine ... many thanks for the lovely comment on my little poem, Joe :) - hugs
McBride  Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Beautiful picture and poem, with great wisdom and knowledge to be gained: ) hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:53 AM
- Thank you very much, Stephan - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:18 AM
So true. Weeds must be destroyed from the roots. Very intelligent poem. Hugs. xx
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:40 AM
- Victor my friend, thank you for your comment :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Beautiful prayer my friend.
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:39 AM
- Thanks for dropping by and your comment, dear Eve - hugs :)
M  Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Beautiful Sunshine!! Debx
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:38 AM
- Thank you, Deb :) ... appreciate your comment :) - hugs
George Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 7:28 AM
'Remove weeds by the root' ! Great exhortation , Smile ! Hugs and Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:37 AM
- Thank you ... always a pleasure to see you on my poems, Valsa :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Lovely message, Anne-Lise. Best to you.
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:36 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay - hugs
Poet Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Anne-Lise, you have written a piece that is quite evocative. Reading this was enjoyable to me.
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:35 AM
- Glad you appreciated it, Las ... thank you :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Very descriptive work you have penned for Brian's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:34 AM
- Thanks so much, Sara ...really appreciate your comment :) - hugs
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