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How oft we loved beneath a verdant weeping willow tree, Your divine vibrant voice of soft tone whispering a dream, How happy we were, as you rested your head on my knee, Listening to migrant warblers composing songs and to The rustle of fragrant leaves drooping down onto the stream. How dulcet your hymns as you declared “I love you, I do.” But time passed in such a quick tempo leaving us so old. Barren branches of a willow tree die, it's life's old theme. Thus, you died on me, and I feel lonely, restless and cold. I yearn for death, but like the willow, life has its own scheme. 18 January 2021 POTD

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Date: 1/29/2021 6:32:00 AM
Soft and haunting, willow trees always have that effect, belated congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:53:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your deserving POTD honors Victor. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/23/2021 4:53:00 PM
Your rejoiced in the willow's shelter, and then 'the willow wept for you.' Pure, beautiful sentiments, Victor! Congrats on a richly deserved POTD. Nature's Caresses, Gershon
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Date: 1/22/2021 8:33:00 AM
Romantic and sad at the same time. Wonderful poem, Victor. Congratulations on Poem of the Day :)
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Date: 1/22/2021 5:20:00 AM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:55:00 PM
Beautiful Arturo, lovely lyrics fragranced with love. Congratulations on poem of the day, Victor!
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Date: 1/20/2021 4:42:00 PM
It certainly does...Congratulations Victor Buhaglar on POTD...
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Date: 1/20/2021 4:32:00 PM
Longing to be with the one you love. Deep sigh. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. You are here for a reason, my dear friend. When the time is right, you will be with your sweet love. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/20/2021 3:41:00 PM
A beautiful nostalgic write Victor, a lovely memory of you and your love sat under the willow tree. Congratulations on the well deserved poem of the day~~ Belle
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Date: 1/20/2021 1:20:00 PM
Loved the poem. Congratulations on receiving POTD honors. John
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Date: 1/20/2021 12:05:00 PM
A very beautiful and moving poem, Vic, and a HUGE congrats on potd... Have a great day!
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Date: 1/20/2021 11:37:00 AM
Hello Victor, I am proud of you. Congradts. The Weeping willow is my fav. tree. At the end your poem is sad. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 1/20/2021 11:29:00 AM
Victor, beautiful melancholic and romantic writing that you are so gifted at. Loved the musical and nature undertones. Congrats on your POTD today, enjoy your day ~ John
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Date: 1/20/2021 11:06:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on POTD with your heartfelt poem!
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:38:00 AM
Hi Victor, You've penned such a heartfelt poem. I found it to be sad and romantic! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/20/2021 9:24:00 AM
Acceptant surrender, vibrant in aloneness ~ each breath a wonder, in blissfulness ~ death of form inevitable ~ play of life magical & eternal ... enjoyed your beautiful poem, beautifully portrayed emotions! Congrats on POTD
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:51:00 AM
Victor, a beautiful poem and a big congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day _ Constance
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Sad and yet a beautiful story/write. For everything there is a season. The good memories are the best. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.....................
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:57:00 AM
Sad emotions throughout the poem Victor. Congrats on your deserving POTD. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:46:00 AM
Moving poem dear poet, congratulations on POTD sweet vb, xomo! <3
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:42:00 AM
Lots and lots of CONGRATULATIONS my friend on your awesome POTD. Jennifer.
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:40:00 AM
Hi Victor, don't yearn for death my friend, we will all sleep forever one day, but as you say God has His own scheme, and who knows what He has yet in store for you? A breathtaking write Victor. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 1/20/2021 5:40:00 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day, Victor. Enjoy the spotlight.
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Date: 1/20/2021 5:10:00 AM
There's always been a sense of romaticism connected to a weeping willow, and now, in winter, even more so when its leaves have fallen like tears. Congratulations on this write being chosen as the POTD, Victor.
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Date: 1/20/2021 4:25:00 AM
Congrats on POTD with this wonderful write. God bless you
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