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Beneath a Willow Tree

How oft we loved beneath a verdant weeping willow tree,
Your divine vibrant voice of soft tone whispering a dream, 
How happy we were, as you rested your head on my knee,
Listening to migrant warblers composing songs and to
The rustle of fragrant leaves drooping down onto the stream.

How dulcet your hymns as you declared “I love you, I do.”
But time passed in such a quick tempo leaving us so old.
Barren branches of a willow tree die, it's life's old theme. 
Thus, you died on me, and I feel lonely, restless and cold.
I yearn for death, but like the willow, life has its own scheme.


18 January 2021

POTD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Daniel Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Soft and haunting, willow trees always have that effect, belated congratulations on POTD:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Belated congratulations on your deserving POTD honors Victor. Blessings xxoo
Wolf Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 4:53 PM
Your rejoiced in the willow's shelter, and then 'the willow wept for you.' Pure, beautiful sentiments, Victor! Congrats on a richly deserved POTD. Nature's Caresses, Gershon
Crabtree Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Romantic and sad at the same time. Wonderful poem, Victor. Congratulations on Poem of the Day :)
Y. Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Beautiful Arturo, lovely lyrics fragranced with love. Congratulations on poem of the day, Victor!
Michael Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:42 PM
It certainly does...Congratulations Victor Buhaglar on POTD...
Nicole Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Longing to be with the one you love. Deep sigh. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. You are here for a reason, my dear friend. When the time is right, you will be with your sweet love. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Edmonds  Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 3:41 PM
A beautiful nostalgic write Victor, a lovely memory of you and your love sat under the willow tree. Congratulations on the well deserved poem of the day~~ Belle
Summers Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 1:20 PM
Loved the poem. Congratulations on receiving POTD honors. John
Downing  Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 12:05 PM
A very beautiful and moving poem, Vic, and a HUGE congrats on potd... Have a great day!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Hello Victor, I am proud of you. Congradts. The Weeping willow is my fav. tree. At the end your poem is sad. Enjoy your day my friend.
Watt Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Victor, beautiful melancholic and romantic writing that you are so gifted at. Loved the musical and nature undertones. Congrats on your POTD today, enjoy your day ~ John
Kitchin Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Victor, congratulations on POTD with your heartfelt poem!
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Hi Victor, You've penned such a heartfelt poem. I found it to be sad and romantic! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
Seeker Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Acceptant surrender, vibrant in aloneness ~ each breath a wonder, in blissfulness ~ death of form inevitable ~ play of life magical & eternal ... enjoyed your beautiful poem, beautifully portrayed emotions! Congrats on POTD
La France Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Victor, a beautiful poem and a big congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day _ Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Sad and yet a beautiful story/write. For everything there is a season. The good memories are the best. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.....................
Jayasankar Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Sad emotions throughout the poem Victor. Congrats on your deserving POTD. God bless. ~ Ani
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January 20, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Moving poem dear poet, congratulations on POTD sweet vb, xomo! <3
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Lots and lots of CONGRATULATIONS my friend on your awesome POTD. Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Hi Victor, don't yearn for death my friend, we will all sleep forever one day, but as you say God has His own scheme, and who knows what He has yet in store for you? A breathtaking write Victor. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day, Victor. Enjoy the spotlight.
Logan Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:10 AM
There's always been a sense of romaticism connected to a weeping willow, and now, in winter, even more so when its leaves have fallen like tears. Congratulations on this write being chosen as the POTD, Victor.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Congrats on POTD with this wonderful write. God bless you
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