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Beneath a Jadeite Moon

My poetic senses are fertile tonight The moon resembles jadeite, in hues of pink Without hesitation, my pen soars in flight scribing quixotic sonnets in ebon ink Rhymed verses of amorous trysts in starlight and two hearts pulsing as one in rhythmic sync Images I conceive through an artist's eyes Romance should never be shadowed in disguise September 9, 2022 checked with howmanysyllable and rhymezone

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2022 1:08:00 PM

Quite a winning work. Way to go. Congratulations!! Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Mark Massey

Date: 10/3/2022 10:54:00 AM

This is excellent Jenna. Metered verse in odd counts is difficult for me, the cadence doesn't feel right... yours flows effortlessly. Well done and a well deserved win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2022 10:59:00 AM

I truly appreciate your kind comments. Thanks ever so much, Mark.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/3/2022 7:19:00 AM

Very vivid Jenna. read penning :) Congratulations on your win! Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2022 10:42:00 AM

Your remarks are always so thoughtful. Thanks, Linda.

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/3/2022 5:16:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... Delighted am I with your last line: "Romance should never be shadowed in disguise." God bless you.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2022 6:49:00 AM

It should not. Thank you very much for liking my entry, Beata.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2022 5:30:00 PM

Dear Jenna, beneath a pink hued moon, your romantic pen sparkles with the captured magic of starlight, and “quixotic sonnets” (love that, btw) tremble with the pulse of your heart’s imagination. A stunning poem! Congratulations for your excellent win in Milt’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2022 6:48:00 AM

Thank you ever so much, Susan. I sincerely appreciate your kind thoughts and congratulations.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/2/2022 1:55:00 PM

Jenna, a wonderful romantic poem, congratulations on your podium placement!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2022 4:23:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Tania.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/2/2022 11:19:00 AM

Such a lovely poem! CONGRATS on your win, Jenna. Janice

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2022 4:23:00 PM

Thank you very much, Janice.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/2/2022 10:15:00 AM

A superb, delightful poem, Jenna, and I acknowledge your achieving the second level on the podium. Everything clicked in your poem, and I gave it several readings. Congratulations, my friend!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2022 4:23:00 PM

Thank you for honoring my entry with 2nd place in your contest, Milt. I always appreciate your supportive comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/9/2022 9:58:00 PM

Vividly descriptive, skillfully written, romantic piece, Jenna! Janice

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/10/2022 5:14:00 AM

I appreciate each kind comment, Janice. Thanks so much!

Deb M

Date: 9/9/2022 8:58:00 PM

Romantic, beautiful and just delightful Jenna….another beauty! Debx

Deb M
Date: 9/16/2022 2:12:00 AM

I await in anticipation boss lady!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/12/2022 3:26:00 AM

lol Deb. With your pizazz, I'm sure you make great tips, but we'll see about a raise sometime soon

Deb M
Date: 9/10/2022 5:45:00 AM

I’m one of your saloon waitresses Jenna…..no time for cheerleading hehe! I mean what I say you write beautiful poetry! (No I’m not after a pay rise!!) Debx

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/10/2022 5:13:00 AM

I'm going to make you a cheerleader for my poems, Deb. ;) Thank you!

John Lawless

Date: 9/9/2022 2:25:00 PM

Fantastic, my pencil just blushed and gave me that ...."why can't you write like that" look....

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/9/2022 2:57:00 PM

aww, John. That's quite a lovely compliment, and one for which I sincerely thank you.

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/9/2022 12:04:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Jenna, flows like silk across silk, your romantic poems are delicate yet extremely powerful, how you interweave these opposing contrasts is quite magical, and a delight to read, all the best for contest, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/9/2022 12:41:00 PM

Your description of my lines is poetic beauty unto themselves. Thank you for appreciating my interwoven thoughts, David.

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/9/2022 11:36:00 AM

there are poets who try and write about romance, but they have no shades or shadows rendered in the aura of candlelight, then there are poets like you whose heart and soul drip upon the page in the wondrous wonder of tender emotion...Frederic

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/9/2022 11:45:00 AM

Frederic, your gracious comments are as sweet as honey to me because I admire your ability to write romantic sonnets. I treasure your opinion and I'm honored by your compliments. Thank you ever so much.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/9/2022 10:59:00 AM

Exquisite lines are these Jenna! Let your pen soar!! Happy Friday xxoo

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/9/2022 11:24:00 AM

Hi Mike, and thank you for your wonderfully kind thoughts. I always appreciate your visits.