Jenna Logan Poet Ottava rima

Beneath a Jadeite Moon

My poetic senses are fertile tonight
The moon resembles jadeite, in hues of pink
Without hesitation, my pen soars in flight
scribing quixotic sonnets in ebon ink
Rhymed verses of amorous trysts in starlight
and two hearts pulsing as one in rhythmic sync
Images I conceive through an artist's eyes
Romance should never be shadowed in disguise



September 9, 2022
checked with howmanysyllable and rhymezone

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Sara Kendrick October 3, 2022 at 1:08 PM Quite a winning work. Way to go. Congratulations!! Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler October 3, 2022 at 7:19 AM Very vivid Jenna. read penning :) Congratulations on your win! Linda Jenna Logan October 3, 2022 at 10:42 AM Your remarks are always so thoughtful. Thanks, Linda.

Beata Agustin October 3, 2022 at 5:16 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... Delighted am I with your last line: "Romance should never be shadowed in disguise." God bless you. Jenna Logan October 3, 2022 at 6:49 AM It should not. Thank you very much for liking my entry, Beata.

Susan Ashley October 2, 2022 at 5:30 PM Dear Jenna, beneath a pink hued moon, your romantic pen sparkles with the captured magic of starlight, and “quixotic sonnets” (love that, btw) tremble with the pulse of your heart’s imagination. A stunning poem! Congratulations for your excellent win in Milt’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Jenna Logan October 3, 2022 at 6:48 AM Thank you ever so much, Susan. I sincerely appreciate your kind thoughts and congratulations.

Tania Kitchin October 2, 2022 at 1:55 PM Jenna, a wonderful romantic poem, congratulations on your podium placement! Jenna Logan October 2, 2022 at 4:23 PM Thanks ever so much, Tania.

Janice Canerdy October 2, 2022 at 11:19 AM Such a lovely poem! CONGRATS on your win, Jenna. Janice Jenna Logan October 2, 2022 at 4:23 PM Thank you very much, Janice.

L Milton Hankins October 2, 2022 at 10:15 AM A superb, delightful poem, Jenna, and I acknowledge your achieving the second level on the podium. Everything clicked in your poem, and I gave it several readings. Congratulations, my friend! Jenna Logan October 2, 2022 at 4:23 PM Thank you for honoring my entry with 2nd place in your contest, Milt. I always appreciate your supportive comments.

Janice Canerdy September 9, 2022 at 9:58 PM Vividly descriptive, skillfully written, romantic piece, Jenna! Janice Jenna Logan September 10, 2022 at 5:14 AM I appreciate each kind comment, Janice. Thanks so much!

Deb M September 9, 2022 at 8:58 PM Romantic, beautiful and just delightful Jenna….another beauty! Debx Deb M September 16, 2022 at 2:12 AM I await in anticipation boss lady!! Jenna Logan September 12, 2022 at 3:26 AM lol Deb. With your pizazz, I'm sure you make great tips, but we'll see about a raise sometime soon Deb M September 10, 2022 at 5:45 AM I’m one of your saloon waitresses Jenna…..no time for cheerleading hehe! I mean what I say you write beautiful poetry! (No I’m not after a pay rise!!) Debx Jenna Logan September 10, 2022 at 5:13 AM I'm going to make you a cheerleader for my poems, Deb. ;) Thank you!

John Lawless September 9, 2022 at 2:25 PM Fantastic, my pencil just blushed and gave me that ...."why can't you write like that" look.... Jenna Logan September 9, 2022 at 2:57 PM aww, John. That's quite a lovely compliment, and one for which I sincerely thank you.

David Kavanagh September 9, 2022 at 12:04 PM Beautiful poetry Jenna, flows like silk across silk, your romantic poems are delicate yet extremely powerful, how you interweave these opposing contrasts is quite magical, and a delight to read, all the best for contest, cheers David Jenna Logan September 9, 2022 at 12:41 PM Your description of my lines is poetic beauty unto themselves. Thank you for appreciating my interwoven thoughts, David.

Frederic Parker September 9, 2022 at 11:36 AM there are poets who try and write about romance, but they have no shades or shadows rendered in the aura of candlelight, then there are poets like you whose heart and soul drip upon the page in the wondrous wonder of tender emotion...Frederic Jenna Logan September 9, 2022 at 11:45 AM Frederic, your gracious comments are as sweet as honey to me because I admire your ability to write romantic sonnets. I treasure your opinion and I'm honored by your compliments. Thank you ever so much.

Mike Gentile September 9, 2022 at 10:59 AM Exquisite lines are these Jenna! Let your pen soar!! Happy Friday xxoo Jenna Logan September 9, 2022 at 11:24 AM Hi Mike, and thank you for your wonderfully kind thoughts. I always appreciate your visits.