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Bending Zen

i felt a
faint no
i fainted
and fell
for what
seemed
like Alice
hours down
a rabbit's hole

then smelled
a smell that
became more
turning to 
a stench
i found
myself
without
hipboots

standing bare
footed and
bare naked
in a bog
in a fog
in a...

state of dream
dreaming that
i'm thinking
about what 
i'm dreaming
but how...

now maybe waking
shaken yet not
knowing am i
to forever find
what i can't
find in
dream
or even
awakening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/29/2019 9:38:00 PM
Sucked me right in, this one. xomo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/30/2019 6:16:00 PM
A real black hole of poetry jajaja. Thanks Maureen.

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