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Bemused Wonder

to sit in the darkroom of silence trying to remember your name, your face to gaze upon time's long ribbon of passing and find the moment, when we became lovers in another time, another place to find dust-filled treasure in yesterday where some of the faces quickly fade others pause, as I visit in quiet wondering what could have been having they stayed to fall into the darkness filled with eyes, staring in the distance, once known and caressed if briefly, now a mirror held in the mind filled with tarnished reflections of moments confessed where the light left long ago and shadows retreated to an empty dark of tomorrow's dawn where faces form quietly on silent roads of sunsets and leaf cluttered paths, we walked on with bemused wonder, if our memories met as they cross the cold separation of years I look upon

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Date: 10/12/2017 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic on your win with this eloquent and beautifully written poem. Amazing imagery!
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Date: 10/10/2017 11:20:00 PM
Just exquisite and full of extraordinary imagery, Frederic - I am a sincere fan, sir - congrats on another win! :-)
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Date: 10/10/2017 8:34:00 PM
Awesome. Powerful imagery. A new fave.
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Date: 3/4/2016 7:23:00 PM
this is one of the best poems I have read this entire week! I think you should try more free verse. it really suits you. FAVE.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/4/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thank you my poetic friend, you are very kind as always
Date: 3/3/2016 7:50:00 PM
Frederic, I wish my memories were this lucid. You certainly have a way with your wording and phrasing. A beautiful write my friend. Peace :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/4/2016 10:03:00 AM
thank you Daniel for your kindness

Book: Shattered Sighs