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Oh my beloved unlock yourself from my mind and appear before my eyes whenever I think about you so that I can see you when I long to be near you When my mind's stream of yearnings starts pouring out like a waterfall and flows as a river of romantic verses that I write only for you oh! how much I wish that those words of love that my muse sprinkles in a blank paper gather themselves on their own to sketch an alphabetic portrait of you so that I could keep gazing at your charming face When fate, like a monster, separates us All I wish is... To just be the last word of your most inspiring verse that you already have in your mind and yet to write in pen and paper To just be an unstressed syllable of your name whenever and wherever your name is called out loud to honour you To just be the faint flickering light at the end of the dark tunnel of your dull dreary days Date: 01/30/2023 Writing Challenge - B Word Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/19/2023 6:31:00 AM
Stunning emotion you have captured in your magical words dear Ani ! What a write . A fav for me ! A belated congratulations on your first place win my friend . I love - sketch an alphabetic portrait of you and - To just be an unstressed syllable of your name ! Big hugs dear one . Sending love always , Susan :)
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Date: 3/14/2023 6:16:00 PM
Mesmerizing romantic write! I have no words! Congratulations! A fav for me.
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:32:00 PM
Super lovely poem penned; great to read; congrats for Superb 1st position
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:56:00 AM
Such a romantic! Love it! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:46:00 AM
Ani, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Date: 2/3/2023 5:29:00 AM
Beautiful poem Ani. Your love for your beloved shines. Emotions of love poured down from your heart possess the force of a torrent to sweep you away :) Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 2/2/2023 12:16:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic poetry Anitha. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 2/1/2023 10:54:00 PM
Another romantic verse, beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/1/2023 1:53:00 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2023 1:26:00 PM
wow, you are SO talented, dear friend. You created a marvelous poem. The part about the unstressed syllable was SO creative. I miss our chats! FAVE for this one.
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Date: 2/1/2023 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/story. Have a blessed day..........
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Date: 1/30/2023 7:54:00 PM
Oh wow! Spectacular poem, Anitha. I loved it.
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