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Belmont Vista

Belmont wallows in westering twilight, sheep graze in cold pastures, hares scamper, ignoring a circling hawk. Blackpool's urban sprawl crawls off up to the scarred horizon, the Tower pricks the heavens like a syringe, spilling the blood-red sun. Evening falls, I'm all alone and free to stare, a wondrous, star-flecked firmament in phosphorescent flare!

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Date: 2/25/2009 10:10:00 AM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way.Nice use of similie in stanza two. This one begs for more than one reading. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comments on my haiku. Have a good day. Karen
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