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Belly of the Beast

Belly of the BEAST In the dark mountain shadow A fiery breeze coming from the East Warmness is ripping up the sky Hearing the sound of the Dragon Beast Wings swimming in the air. A sacrifice in motions Hands wave in the air Chanting and dancing To the rhythm of a meal being prepared Splitting flames above all shoulders A virgin upon the master who stares An event showered with a sacrifice feeding the Beast with a virgin device A Virgin so pure being prepared for the Beast With sharp fangs that will feast on her innocent crest. Clawing his grip upon her flesh Away into the sky, as she took her last breath In a distance the Dragon Beast, arrives in his domain Detaching the virgins limbs, ready to steady his appetite The beast devours into her tender and juicy meat With a taste so sweet and ripe Sinking his jaws in every bite The fruit of the apple, did not full the dragons hunger the virgin meat came with a foul taste of deceit. Filled with an abysmal of rage The beast set out to scavenge, the betrayal With a heat that will send them all to their grave. The broke vow of the virgin sweet tale. Reveal the revenge how the dragon beast speared out. His crackling fires upon all skin Leaving a smell of brimstone to all who got in his way, a hell he opened, with no mercy to pray The Dragon Beast is one of the Devil's form of evil In the battle of the Kingdom's last day. By: P.D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/18/2014 5:48:00 PM
I have no idea how you can be so prolific. It is uncanny and never a bad write. You should be working in hollywood. They need great writing minds like yours.
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:39:00 PM
VERY AROUSEING YOUR WRITES LINDA I WISH I COULD WRITE HOW YOU DO IN THAT WAY COOL WRITE DAVIDSCOTTXX
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:05:00 PM
By the way,this is going on my fav list, your works will soon take up too much space on there lol...and if you don't mind, no more callin me Taylor. It seems so formal, so Audonus will do just fine, or Train if thats more fun, its what my friends call me...LONG Story related to football..lol Later!
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:02:00 PM
How do you do it?! Your diction is impressive and your writing reminds me so much of my own in that, well, it's freaking amazing, not bragging but you know! lol I end up reading you last everytime I log on, because I know something will be great if not inspirational to my unique point of view. Oh and love the comment on Blank and how well you analyzed it. And to your other question, I write songs too! It started this year. I just wanted to branch out, hopefully I will be great at it soon.
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:19:00 AM
So Chaucer like ... so much more full of imagery, so apocalyptic, so wonderfully poetic. May God bless you forever, One love, my friend
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Date: 7/20/2010 5:49:00 PM
I like the metaphors. Nice! When I enter your contest you will taste defeat instead of deceit. LOL. Nice write I enjoyed it. Really though are you gonna slam back or what? I think I smell, It smells like... well I better not. HAhahahaaa! L.L.
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Date: 7/8/2010 8:50:00 PM
(: heyyy P.D. hope your doing great today, this morning i woke up and all of a sudden i felt a hell of a pain on my temple, like something sharp was biting me there, and like within seconds this big red pimple formed on it, and i even felt it growin forming there in seconds, i was creeped out, still am.): hey, keep the slams coming. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/5/2010 11:51:00 AM
Excellent imagery in this story, LeeAnn! I muchas gracias por el comentario de mariposas! Have a great week and let your creative pen flow!...Gert
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Date: 7/4/2010 10:15:00 AM
Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:52:00 PM
wow , great imagery! Excellent poem `Rebecca C
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Date: 7/3/2010 10:34:00 AM
Jeepers creepers PD ! Had me on a serious roll there ! james
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Date: 7/3/2010 10:27:00 AM
whats this virgin device. im only curious is all, that beast should never judge by the look of an apple. interesting, and creactive.:pD: ~Always&Forever LYnette
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:56:00 AM
Did you get your mail?
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:23:00 AM
Great imagery and storyline, enjoyed it a lot.
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:47:00 AM
yup :) that's why I love it here, I get to find kindred spirits ;), glad we have some things in common --well you enjoy your day now!! ^_^
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:27:00 AM
haha I sure can be gullible sometimes---eeek---you sure beat us--for some reason we never did pull a switcheroo--how boring can we get??? you're too sneaky using her name--so you must be close in age then ;)
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:18:00 AM
no way Nikko no twin i was making a comment to your poemm,,lol,,got to many sis,,, but only one can share and relate to my idenity,,, especially if i get pulled over by a cop.. lol...i will use her name
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:16:00 AM
that is the freakiest thing ever if you have a twin too--or are you just messing with me? but if it's true--that is just so so cool--we would be so alike in more ways than one ;)
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:14:00 AM
wait up?? what do you mean??? you have a twin???? you're kidding me right???
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Date: 7/3/2010 1:02:00 AM
yep and I am still here too, p.D. I just HAVE to finishmy comments if I can before Joe gets home from driving to STockton, CA. and back. He missed his Bday and I wanted to stay up for him but man am I ever tired. Anyway, I am so obsessed with getting all my comments answered. I kill myself sometimes. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:44:00 AM
Hi, there, PD. did you go off or are you still here in the wee hours of morning!! Happy FOURTH!
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:11:00 PM
The images you conjure up with your words is amazing.. Takes the reader in the midst of all the action.. Enjoyed this immensely tc Wilma
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:08:00 PM
hello p.d., to kool i'd be mad to hope i dont get trixed b.boy
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Date: 7/2/2010 5:24:00 PM
Thank you for setting me straight! I think I've fixed the problem! You have soup mail!
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:56:00 PM
Oh, the beast in me was preparing to devour the virgin long before I finished the poem. You rascal! You have brought out the beast in me. Such a talent -Oi, Oi, Oi. Love, daver
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