-belly Button Madness-

his fingers map out subtle areas all over-- my belly button no exception, impious outlines, his goal to stir me…
*another "challenge" from Missy Nikko* :) 11/04/2011
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Fraser Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Ooo I want to be a cartographer and re-draw this undulating map. All contours covered and sized. Terrific Tanka Wilma....:)
Poet Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 1:17 PM
Really stirring write!It is almost 2AM of 13th here!!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 5:19 AM
hot and steamy .. Wilma.. on fire in my mind with fantastic playful lines.. that Missy Nikko is something else and a sweet friend too..luv.
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Create lovely sensual feelings, Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Wilma, I have to tell you about my belly button sometime! This is really cool. WIsh I had time to check out what all this is about with challenges but I am rushing off as usual. LUv, andrea
Falotico Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Cold Shower even if I lived in Alaska after this read....Lucky fingers , with a heated write... LOvely warm feeling my dear Wilma..love Michael ps Might have to get in on these writes lol
Foulk Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 2:39 PM
a great piece of creative work
Onclaud Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 2:17 PM
hmmm, enjoying the word challenge here with nikks, wilma.... outrageously divine! ;) hugggs, nette
Devonshire Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 8:35 AM
What a warm romantic poem, Wilma. My belly button is ticklish, though, and it would eliminate any feelings of passion. Really enjoyed this one, dear. Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:40 AM
yup, I had to think of something that would be a bit cold for your hotties-- the nose, knows, righty?? ok ok get back to work-- & I mean REAL work!! haha see you later when I get back--you better have a nose write missy ;) kidding! & yup, insanity's my middle name & I think so is yours lol ;)
K. Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:32 AM
thank you--you are too kind! & hmm are you up for more madness? haha I should be judging lol and what am I doing here?! ok keep yourself busy-- soup might get too hot & burn--I would have to go skip, skip over the other juicy parts though and go straight to and Pick the -------------------->NOSE!!! hahaha!!
K. Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:11 AM
gosh you sure are stepping up to the plate Missy with this hottie! I think I better call you Missy Hottie :p-- my feet poem sucks! pales, pales, pales to yours! Whew!!! gosh are you ready for another challenge??
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