Believing

~ Come with me a’ walking this chilly autumn eve Along the vast horizon where two hearts can believe Following the sunset winding down the way Leading to our paradise in nature’s found display Shaded by an oak tree you and I we lie Contemplating every dream under an amber sky Counting constellations, heavenly the bliss Sharing in the solitude a stardust shimmered kiss Mesmerizing beauty, enchanted by the sight Holding you within my arms this cool November night Waiting for a twilight song to flow in from above As we linger for a while believing in our love ~
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Date: 11/15/2019 8:59:00 AM
Chris, I like the sight and song in your Rhyme of a November sunset. -Richard
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 11/15/2019 7:59:00 AM
Surely the warmth of romance! Beautiful!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim.
Date: 11/14/2019 11:20:00 PM
Wow, glorious, my friend. An absolute fave!!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your always nice comments on my work. I appreciate you
Date: 11/14/2019 10:51:00 PM
Nice flow of feelings...masterly penned. Tks
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank so very much. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 11/14/2019 9:00:00 PM
Lovely, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much Line. I appreciate you nice comment today
Date: 11/14/2019 8:06:00 PM
i agree with John, that stardust shimmered kiss was magical... such a beautifully penned poem my friend... what a way to end the evening...sigh... Goodnight Chris... :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:01:00 AM
thank you Sandy. Your kindness is the smile I wear. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 11/14/2019 6:45:00 PM
Stardust shimmered kiss, great write Chris, what a way to say goodnight!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:01:00 AM
Thanks John. I appreciate it, always.
Date: 11/14/2019 6:18:00 PM
This is a beautiful way to end the day, reading this, Chris. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. Have a nice evening :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you for always being so nice to me Heidi.
Date: 11/14/2019 6:15:00 PM
Ah! -- 'a stardust shimmered kiss:' Now that's poetry two hearts can believe in, my friend. Gorgeous imagery; heavenly flow. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank so much my friend for your wonderful comment on my poem.
Date: 11/14/2019 5:59:00 PM
Nice touch Chris. The vibe just flowed off your pen. Thanks for sharing
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Greg.
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