Believing

~ Come with me a’ walking this chilly autumn eve Along the vast horizon where two hearts can believe Following the sunset winding down the way Leading to our paradise in nature’s found display Shaded by an oak tree you and I we lie Contemplating every dream under an amber sky Counting constellations, heavenly the bliss Sharing in the solitude a stardust shimmered kiss Mesmerizing beauty, enchanted by the sight Holding you within my arms this cool November night Waiting for a twilight song to flow in from above As we linger for a while believing in our love ~

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/15/2019 8:59:00 AM

Chris, I like the sight and song in your Rhyme of a November sunset. -Richard

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 9:23:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/15/2019 7:59:00 AM

Surely the warmth of romance! Beautiful!

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim.

Hello There

Date: 11/14/2019 11:20:00 PM

Wow, glorious, my friend. An absolute fave!!

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your always nice comments on my work. I appreciate you

Johnson Vdev

Date: 11/14/2019 10:51:00 PM

Nice flow of feelings...masterly penned. Tks

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank so very much. I am glad you liked it.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/14/2019 9:00:00 PM

Lovely, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so very much Line. I appreciate you nice comment today

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/14/2019 8:06:00 PM

i agree with John, that stardust shimmered kiss was magical... such a beautifully penned poem my friend... what a way to end the evening...sigh... Goodnight Chris... :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 8:01:00 AM

thank you Sandy. Your kindness is the smile I wear. I appreciate you my friend.