Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

Believer

In mischief, kicks patties with hoof.
The slope of his stinker on roof.
The chimney down smokes
And presence did choke. . .
Deers believe in Santa’s reproof.

11/17/2019
Holiday Themed Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Cecilia Macfarlane December 5, 2019 at 6:35 PM Hahaha, good one. Congrats on your win. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2019 at 5:47 PM Way to go on the contest list, Kim. Congratulations.

Na Na December 3, 2019 at 8:48 PM Congrats on your winning poem Kim

Tania Kitchin December 3, 2019 at 8:18 PM Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and funny limerick! Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2019 at 8:23 PM Thank you, Tania :)

Michelle Faulkner November 19, 2019 at 6:49 PM I can almost hear them on the roof, a very fun read, Kim! Kim Rodrigues November 19, 2019 at 8:29 PM Thanks, Michelle!

Maria Williams November 19, 2019 at 4:04 AM A limerick with some fun imagery. Got a chuckle out of that. Chimneys are a dying thing in Aussie houses, Santa surfs it I'm told, with his team of dolphins:) Good luck in the contest Kim....Maria Hugs Kim Rodrigues November 19, 2019 at 8:31 AM I love that imagery..Santa surfing with dolphins...why shouldn’t he evolve with the times. Hugs...Kim

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2019 at 3:31 PM Nicely done. It looks like you already did three and I can't think of one dang holiday limerick. Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2019 at 6:36 PM This is the one for contest. :)

Caren Krutsinger November 18, 2019 at 2:53 PM Good luck in the contest, Kim. Fun! Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2019 at 6:36 PM Thank you, Caren!

Chris Green November 18, 2019 at 10:28 AM Now that was a funny scene to picture. Gives a new meaning to "up on the rooftop" :) Best wishes in the contest Kim. Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2019 at 6:37 PM LOL! We never think of what goes on up there. ;)

Gershon Wolf November 17, 2019 at 9:38 PM Sure am chuckling at that second line there! Good luck, Kim! :) gw Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2019 at 9:40 PM Lol :)

Na Na November 17, 2019 at 8:00 PM Hi Kim I thought your other one was for the contest. my bad. This is is just as good. Good imagination. Best of luck in the contest Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2019 at 9:40 PM Thank you, Greg