Believer

In mischief, kicks patties with hoof. The slope of his stinker on roof. The chimney down smokes And presence did choke. . . Deers believe in Santa’s reproof. 11/17/2019 Holiday Themed Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/5/2019 6:35:00 PM

Hahaha, good one. Congrats on your win. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2019 5:47:00 PM

Way to go on the contest list, Kim. Congratulations.

Na Na

Date: 12/3/2019 8:48:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Kim

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/3/2019 8:18:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and funny limerick!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2019 8:23:00 PM

Thank you, Tania :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/19/2019 6:49:00 PM

I can almost hear them on the roof, a very fun read, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2019 8:29:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle!

Maria Williams

Date: 11/19/2019 4:04:00 AM

A limerick with some fun imagery. Got a chuckle out of that. Chimneys are a dying thing in Aussie houses, Santa surfs it I'm told, with his team of dolphins:) Good luck in the contest Kim....Maria Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2019 8:31:00 AM

I love that imagery..Santa surfing with dolphins...why shouldn’t he evolve with the times. Hugs...Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2019 3:31:00 PM

Nicely done. It looks like you already did three and I can't think of one dang holiday limerick.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 6:36:00 PM

This is the one for contest. :)