Being With Myself

In a tent, I remove my clothes

As fog piles on skin;
 
Yet, I trace the woods---

One with stars, cuddling peace

On a night meant for me.



Somewhere Contest: nette onclaud
Written 1.07.2015 by Rora Onna
30 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:41 AM
A camper you are!!! Nicely done.
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January 14, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Rora, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
Garg Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Congrats on your great win /// Archana
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Great win congrats love Rora-]rajat
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January 13, 2015 at 11:09 PM
A perfect, peaceful evening alone with nature...a wonderful somewhere! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
Mehta Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 9:35 PM
A great visual, congrats on the win, Rora
Nance Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 5:35 PM
That would be a peaceful night, nature and soul pure! wonderful write and great win!
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Sounds idyllic to be at one with nature - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Meade Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 1:56 PM
Nature can nurture our souls allowing us to let down our guards. Outstanding write.
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