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Being There

Lost within foolish ways, of yesteryear days- those fleeting moments die, in memory's haze- this passage in the sun- 'til our day is done

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Elaine George

Date: 9/21/2009 7:39:00 AM

Much to ponder here. Thank you for sharing. And, thank you for your continued support. Best regards, Elaine

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/21/2009 6:10:00 AM

This beautifully written Lanterne seqeunce is perfect, Brian, and fiiled with the wisdom that you always grace us with. Love, Robin

John Freeman

Date: 9/20/2009 3:01:00 PM

beautiful flowing Lanterne, Brian, you've got the knack, We're soon to forget, that's a problem with humanity. Thanks for sharing in the reminder. Sincerely, Moses

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/20/2009 2:30:00 PM

Ah yes the foolish things we did in days past. They say been there did that and it becomes a memory of the past. God Bless Phyl

P Sheart

Date: 9/20/2009 11:18:00 AM

A beautiful sentiment Brian. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/20/2009 10:22:00 AM

We learn through the years.....we have all been foolish at some time in our yesterdays....but such foolishness helps us grow. An insightful poem! ~ Carrie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/20/2009 4:59:00 AM

you have given us much to think about here! Brian!...well done!, Jim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2009 2:53:00 AM

Good topic to bring to our attention. Wouldn't it be nice to be able to say no to having foolish ways. Thanks for your comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara