Being Lazy

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Brenda Mcgrath.

Being lazy today is the name of the game. I have no remorse, I have no shame. I’m watching Hallmark movies to my heart’s content. This Saturday afternoon will be well spent. Come hell or high water, I won’t leave the couch. This is what the doctor ordered for being a grouch. The housework can wait, this requires my attention. Being lazy today is the mother of invention! 9/17/16 Contest No 217 Any Form, Any Topic Max of 10 Lines Sponsor: Brian Strand Awarded 9th Place

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2016 4:43:00 PM

In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/5/2016 4:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara! We all need a lazy day afternoon sometimes. :)

Beverly Read

Date: 9/18/2016 12:27:00 AM

Very descriptive of a wonderful Saturday afternoon. Reminds me of the time we watched three movies one night just for the sake of doing it. Thanks for the memory.

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/18/2016 12:32:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it. It was indeed a lazy afternoon.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/17/2016 9:47:00 PM

I love this, Brenda! Watching Hallmark movies all day would be my lazy day treat, too. Great write! Blessings!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/17/2016 11:21:00 PM

Thanks Kim. I lucked out I had not seen them before :)

Old Man Emu

Date: 9/17/2016 6:34:00 PM

Ha Ha, It's what I'm doing now by reading others poems. I don't think you should call it lazy though, just recharging the batteries. Kind regards, Craig

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/17/2016 6:39:00 PM

Thanks Craig. I think you are right :)