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Being Human Birthed to the world through a woman’s womb Experiencing the trials and joys of growing each day Individuality and identity take place along the way Naiveté and innocence goes forever astray Grown up you are and the child’s gone away Humble human hearts beat longer they say Under much less modern stress Managing the daily trials and lifelong tests At times of pleasant recreation, work and rest Never turning from the God who knows what’s best 7/5/16 Contest 244 Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2016 5:37:00 PM

way to go on your win, Janis. Big congrats to you.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/10/2016 5:46:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/10/2016 4:03:00 PM

A beautiful Acrostic, Janis. I too love the way you began with child in the womb and continued through the journeys of life, and also with your tribute to God who created our 'humanness.' Congratulations on your nice placement. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/10/2016 5:45:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra.....Overall I think it was a very good contest experience.

Lu Loo

Date: 7/10/2016 10:37:00 AM

Janis, an amazing acrostic lady! I love how you started from the womb and you are right God does know whats best! congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/10/2016 11:45:00 AM

Thanks, Laura.....I'm finding acrostics are fun and this is my third one.....

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2016 11:13:00 PM

Congratulations Janis. I didn't think the baby was yours, it just reminded me of how life is precious. Maybe I am still not getting it? Cheers on your high placement! 7 ; )

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/10/2016 11:47:00 AM

Connie, when you commented on My Little Man, you though he was mine and I replied to your comment that i was his first grade teacher. That was what I was referring to. Thanks for your comments and your rating.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/9/2016 8:28:00 PM

Janis just a wonderful write, thank you, congrats on your fine placement!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/10/2016 11:48:00 AM

Wonderful idea for a contest. Thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/8/2016 4:33:00 AM

Bringing a child into this world is God's greatest gift to us. I treasure my children above all else on earth. Your poem is lovely Janis. 7 ; )

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/8/2016 3:22:00 PM

Connie, this is not mine either.....laugh! Look at your replies if you don't get it.....Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2016 2:52:00 PM

this is wonderful, Janis. you sure did capture what being human is all about. Did he allow rhyme this time? I sure hope so because this deserves a spot!!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/6/2016 3:13:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea....it doesn't say...