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Being God's Pen

Being God's Pen Written: by Tom Wright 2006 Thoughts Promenade inside my head Absent of composition or direction, As water dollops on a heated griddle. I pass time exhuming notions Thought long ago perished. From night filled crevices of my mother wit, I examine ideas whose propellant is as monster bat wings darting to and fro. Free flying, suddenly vanishing, As if having been exiled from my psyche. Their duration, analogous to griddle dollops; Once vaporization has occurred, I'm left to contemplate these mental aerobics, In selfish tones, while examining my worthiness As God's humble quill this day. Conceivably, those concepts I've pursued, Will birth in ink another time. A time of God's convenience and choosing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 7/11/2008 5:14:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week. What a remarkable poem with beautiful conclusion. How mighty a pen would be being the God's pen!I am awe-struck
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Date: 7/11/2008 7:49:00 AM
if there was anything higher than 7 i'd add ten to that! this is awesome and unlikely, I am so FEELING THIS! figuratively and literally. Thank You for sharing.
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Date: 7/9/2008 11:28:00 AM
Interesting and inspirational piece. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/9/2008 8:38:00 AM
Hi Tom Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Just beautiful. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/9/2008 4:13:00 AM
Tom,congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2008 9:14:00 PM
very interesting poem - I am sure I will read it a few more times - congrats on being featured
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Date: 7/6/2008 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/6/2008 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations Tom on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/6/2008 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Tom on the featuring of your poem "Being God's Pen." Vince
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