Being Followed

Walking down the street one dark night; I passed some road working equipment. Down the road a bit, I felt I was being followed. I glanced back and saw a backhoe that I’d passed at the work site; my god, I thought, I’ve walked three blocks since I passed that site; why is that backhoe following me? I turned a corner and four blocks later I looked again…yes, backhoe was two blocks behind me! Should I run? Would it chase me? My apartment was six blocks away; I entered an all night pharmacy and from its window, I watched the backhoe; it sat perfectly still. I bought a soda and left the pharmacy; two blocks, three, four; I was nearly home now. The shadow of my apartment building loomed in the distance; when I reached it, I ran quickly inside, glancing back behind me; there, one block away, that vile, living backhoe! I went up three flights of stairs to my apartment, taking two steps at a time. I looked out my window and wondered if I or anyone else dwelling there were safe from the backhoe. Would it try to destroy my building? What would I say to, warn the others there if it should attack? Then, I noticed, it was nowhere in sight! My neighbor, Eddie would be coming home at midnight; would it follow him too? I waited up to ask him about it but, Eddie never arrived; had it gotten him? I caught the bus for work the next morning; exhausted from a sleepless night. As it passed the work site; I swear that backhoe was smiling!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/3/2018 12:21:00 PM
I love this macabre muse, ML. I give it a room "1408" ten shivers and a Raven bat-out-of-hell quiver. Super cool scary. Love and peace always.
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 1:31:00 PM
That was inspired by a backhoe that sat on campus in the same spot for the greater part of a year; I had to cross a field to get to work on the 3rd shift. Every time I passed the thing, I had the thought, now what would happen if that thing came to life right now? Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/3/2018 7:41:00 AM
One crazy story. Shivers...
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thanks again, Kim.
Date: 10/3/2018 7:18:00 AM
Hilarous! I could not wait for the ending, the fact that it could have gotten Eddie sounded pretty sound! Your imagination is having a ball now!
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 1:32:00 PM
For some reason, the big holidays just seem to send it soaring but, yep, it's having a ball! Thanks again.
Date: 10/3/2018 7:12:00 AM
A very creative poem ! Well written M.L. :)
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 1:32:00 PM
Many thanks.
Date: 10/3/2018 7:08:00 AM
You certainly have a way with your imagination my friend..looks like it was looking after you..making sure you got home safely..the smile says it all.
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 1:33:00 PM
Ah, now there's an interesting view. I'd hate to think that it got Eddie and protected me...hmmmm...Ah well... Thanks.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter