Being Alone: Echo Poem 3-Th
Poet's Notes:
My poet's notes must precede the next few Echo Poems because the poet has
not given me permission to publish her poems on my site. I can, of course,
reference them without restriction. So the TH in the title here is short for
Treasure Hunt. To really enjoy my poem to the full (although it does stand
alone as well), I suggest you read Lora Colon's Poem called 'Alone' on
Poemhunter.com first. PH is a great site as well and I publish both places.
Alone Too
Alone….. what relief in the face of life's riot,
Alone….. and what sweet space, fragrant air all around,
Earth's rotation imparts no real sense of motion
Until stars appear! Their swirling dance makes no sound.
Alone….. tanning by an immutable ocean,
Alone….. I surf breaking waves on wind swollen sea,
No hint of confusion, I'm one with the motion,
No sad message from others that disappoints me.
Alone….. in my hammock beneath swaying palm trees,
Alone….. time now to ponder just what a cloud needs,
The wreck of a ship sits rockbound in the distance,
Its broken spine's now home for disparate life's seeds.
Alone….. with the lost! Are prayers ever answered?
Alone….. my heart overwhelmed. Could that be a prayer?
I look at the rainbow as summer squall passes
And find that I'm grateful that I am a player.
Alone….. strange it seems almost no load to shoulder,
Alone….. if I fall down there's no one to make fun,
If life seems too tough, well, whose load do I carry?
Is it just my own stuff or have others piled on?
Alone….. yes it's true that I miss other's laughter,
Alone….. of course there is no real sharing of tears,
Maybe in fact I could set better boundaries,
Taking charge of protection from all of my fears.
Brian Johnston
March 9, 2014
Copyright © Brian Johnston | Year Posted 2014
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