Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Being a Light To Others

In the hospital very sick not very fine                              you called each morning at nine                                      you wanted to see if I was fine                                        your loving words were the right line. 




Needing a ride because you could not see                         I would be over faster than a bee                                     off to shop~lunch and tea                                               I would get you in the door with your blue key. 




Flowers you did bring                                                     beautiful and looking like spring                                       you made me so happy~I wanted to sing                         I wish I could give you something. 




Be a light                                                                       let your life shine bright                                                 others are hurting both day~night                                   be their very special knight. 




Date Written: 3/18/2022  

3 Place 

Being a light to others Contest Judged:3/20/2022  
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Bill Baker April 6, 2022 at 7:49 AM Lovely rhyming verse, Paula. Congrats on your high finish in the contest. :-) Bill Paula Goldsmith April 6, 2022 at 11:50 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day..........

Gershon Wolf March 23, 2022 at 8:48 PM Sweet, Bright, and a true Light is this special poem, Paula. Poignant penning. Thanks, Gershon Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 12:02 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my light write. Have a great/blessed~~day/.weekend...........

Christuraj Alex March 21, 2022 at 3:55 AM "be their very special knight" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2022 at 10:01 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Be a light/knight to others. Have a great/blessed day...........

Mystic Rose Rose March 21, 2022 at 2:52 AM Now that is love in action dear Paula, congratulations on your win, stay blessed, sending love and light your way Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2022 at 9:59 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my love in action. Be a light. Have a great/blessed day...........

Harry Horsman March 21, 2022 at 1:39 AM These are wonderful stanzas Paula, and the message also. Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2022 at 9:58 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my light message. Have a great/blessed day...........

Valsa George March 20, 2022 at 8:57 PM Congratulations Paula on your win ! Stay Blessed, dear ! Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2022 at 9:57 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day...........

Debra L Brown March 20, 2022 at 7:18 PM Back to congratulate you Paula on your win. Blessings ~ Debra Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2022 at 9:55 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is good to see you back. It is an honor to have this win. Have a great/blessed day...........

Vijay Pandit March 20, 2022 at 1:17 PM Congrats on your win Paula. Much kindness you convey through your splendid words. Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2022 at 1:22 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Gary Radice March 20, 2022 at 1:10 PM Tablets and medicines aren't always the answer. Human kindness can not only compliment them but can substitute them too. Cheers - Gary Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2022 at 1:21 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. It was good to hear from you. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Anoucheka Gangabissoon March 20, 2022 at 9:47 AM Congratulations for the placement and thanks for the entry :) Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2022 at 10:59 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your contest. I enjoyed writing this "Being A Light To others." Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Valsa George March 20, 2022 at 12:09 AM A lovely message coming from your heart, Paula- "Be a light let your life shine bright" . Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2022 at 10:56 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this light message write. We can be a a light to others. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Susan Lawrence March 19, 2022 at 5:15 PM So uplifting and kind and gracious Paula . I believe in Being a Light . We all need to shine on others who need kindness. Hugs , Susan :) Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2022 at 10:54 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this uplifting write.We can be a very special knight to others. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2022 at 3:22 PM these are such nice sweet examples of being a light to someone else. Good luck in the contest, Paula.(if it is for the contest) Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2022 at 10:52 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Mike Gentile March 19, 2022 at 6:45 AM Pauls, these are beautiful sentiments written in beautiful lines! My day mother is always the first to shine here light and help others , a great example of the meaning of your words! Happy Saturday xxoo Paula Goldsmith March 19, 2022 at 2:51 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, shine bright and help others. Happy Saturday to you. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 5:22 PM Paula, I enjoyed your poem. "Be a light let your life shine bright" My Favorite line. Blessings ~ Debra Paula Goldsmith March 19, 2022 at 2:49 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, shine bright. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Honestly J.T. March 18, 2022 at 11:18 AM Nice job Paula Goldsmith March 18, 2022 at 11:50 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............