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Being a Light To Others

In the hospital very sick not very fine you called each morning at nine you wanted to see if I was fine your loving words were the right line. Needing a ride because you could not see I would be over faster than a bee off to shop~lunch and tea I would get you in the door with your blue key. Flowers you did bring beautiful and looking like spring you made me so happy~I wanted to sing I wish I could give you something. Be a light let your life shine bright others are hurting both day~night be their very special knight. Date Written: 3/18/2022 3 Place Being a light to others Contest Judged:3/20/2022 Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/6/2022 7:49:00 AM

Lovely rhyming verse, Paula. Congrats on your high finish in the contest. :-) Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2022 11:50:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day..........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/23/2022 8:48:00 PM

Sweet, Bright, and a true Light is this special poem, Paula. Poignant penning. Thanks, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/25/2022 12:02:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my light write. Have a great/blessed~~day/.weekend...........

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/21/2022 3:55:00 AM

"be their very special knight" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2022 10:01:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Be a light/knight to others. Have a great/blessed day...........

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/21/2022 2:52:00 AM

Now that is love in action dear Paula, congratulations on your win, stay blessed, sending love and light your way

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2022 9:59:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my love in action. Be a light. Have a great/blessed day...........

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/21/2022 1:39:00 AM

These are wonderful stanzas Paula, and the message also.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2022 9:58:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my light message. Have a great/blessed day...........

Valsa George

Date: 3/20/2022 8:57:00 PM

Congratulations Paula on your win ! Stay Blessed, dear !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2022 9:57:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day...........

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/20/2022 7:18:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Paula on your win. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2022 9:55:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is good to see you back. It is an honor to have this win. Have a great/blessed day...........

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/20/2022 1:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win Paula. Much kindness you convey through your splendid words.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2022 1:22:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Gary Radice

Date: 3/20/2022 1:10:00 PM

Tablets and medicines aren't always the answer. Human kindness can not only compliment them but can substitute them too. Cheers - Gary

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2022 1:21:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. It was good to hear from you. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 3/20/2022 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations for the placement and thanks for the entry :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2022 10:59:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your contest. I enjoyed writing this "Being A Light To others." Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Valsa George

Date: 3/20/2022 12:09:00 AM

A lovely message coming from your heart, Paula- "Be a light let your life shine bright" .

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2022 10:56:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this light message write. We can be a a light to others. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/19/2022 5:15:00 PM

So uplifting and kind and gracious Paula . I believe in Being a Light . We all need to shine on others who need kindness. Hugs , Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2022 10:54:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this uplifting write.We can be a very special knight to others. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2022 3:22:00 PM

these are such nice sweet examples of being a light to someone else. Good luck in the contest, Paula.(if it is for the contest)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2022 10:52:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/19/2022 6:45:00 AM

Pauls, these are beautiful sentiments written in beautiful lines! My day mother is always the first to shine here light and help others , a great example of the meaning of your words! Happy Saturday xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2022 2:51:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, shine bright and help others. Happy Saturday to you. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/18/2022 5:22:00 PM

Paula, I enjoyed your poem. "Be a light let your life shine bright" My Favorite line. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2022 2:49:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, shine bright. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/18/2022 11:18:00 AM

Nice job

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 11:50:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............