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Behind Cryptic Doors

Clumsily tripping, over our own feet Sometimes, minds aren't meant to meet perhaps we're off just a micro beat thoughts obscured, behind glass covered in sleet Sure there are those, who wish to exploit but really in the end, what's the point? We're all merely visitors, in this joint Trying our best, with words to annoint Cloisterd in shadows, wanting to be found glimmers of earlier selves, clowning around When others laugh, why do our fears compound? Downturned mouths, strangled crying sounds Embarrassing moments, last an eternity Sometimes I'm my very worst enemy Thinking hidden messages, are meant for me Is that what poetry is meant to be? I let essential words, roll off my lips Credentials have no taste, when I take deep sips Preferring a message, from a page that drips My mind unfocused, takes many trips I like the power, of words intrinsic Flavors and texture, is what I like to lick If it's too saccharin and sweet it makes me sick My pleasure comes, from words hot and thick So you see, I too like to word explore Words found, behind a cryptic door I start upright, end up on the floor Keep on reading, until I can't absorb anymore! Written at the request of James Horn. Response to his "to Come Back Again" Poem. Thanks James, our interaction led to a poem of the day!

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Date: 5/12/2015 10:11:00 PM
This is deep and powerful poem Rick, you are really such a one of a kind and wonderful poet, but still humble in learning, and rich in absorbing, and aware things around you, wishing you a great day, and missed your visit in my last page :) hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2015 7:06:00 AM
Good morning Yanny, I will check it out.
Date: 4/6/2015 7:38:00 AM
This is excellent, Richard; love what thoughts you're passing on, and the rhyming is attractive. I see that this has been chosen POTD...Congratulations! // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/6/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I was pleasantly surprised.
Date: 4/5/2015 4:05:00 AM
Good work, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2015 5:43:00 PM
Thanks James.
Date: 4/4/2015 8:59:00 PM
So nice to read your poetry this evening, Richard, hope you have a nice holiday weekend. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2015 5:47:00 PM
Yes I am having a nice Easter weekend. We have had glorious spring sunshine and a house full of company to share it with.
Date: 4/4/2015 7:34:00 PM
Fantastic write Richard! Congrats on poem of the day! Mind of a Serial Killer 5 just got posted.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thanls for letting me know Tammy.
Date: 4/4/2015 6:28:00 PM
Nice pen! Congratulations Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Njeri.
Date: 4/4/2015 8:29:00 AM
I see this was poem of the day, well no wonder, of course it was. Love the line "words found behind a cryptic door" Gotta keep opening those doors. Now I am thinking of Monty Hall and Lets Make a Deal...Do you want the words behind door number 1, 2 or 3? Would you like to trade your words for what is behind the curtain held by the man in the chicken suit. Whoops! Sorry! My mind went off on one of its tangents.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2015 9:15:00 AM
Ha ha, is seems we are mutually afflicted!
Date: 4/4/2015 8:03:00 AM
This is beautiful richard... I always admire your work which uniquely stimulate my senses.. Great piece here!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2015 9:16:00 AM
So nice to see you Funom!
Date: 4/3/2015 6:13:00 PM
beautiful, congrats on poem of the day!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 6:27:00 PM
Thanks my friend!;0)
Date: 4/3/2015 4:14:00 PM
Congrats. on the potd,Im so happy for you.Thanks tps for the grest choice..Hooray!Happy Easter : )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine!;0)
Date: 4/3/2015 4:06:00 PM
Well penned ..congrats on being POTD...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 4/3/2015 11:53:00 AM
What a power message full of analogy, imagery and such a beautiful rhyme scheme. Your approach inspires me to want to write more rhyming poems that are both technical and meaningful. This was indeed a great selection for The Poem Of The Day! Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 6:02:00 PM
What a nice comment. I don't do a lot of Rhyming but this one kind of wrote it self and I just went along for the ride.
Date: 4/3/2015 9:43:00 AM
An excellent write, Richard! Yes, words can be intoxicating and hold great power. I especially relate to the last line...congrats on being chosen TPOD and Happy Easter...hugs, Rhonda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thanks and happy Easter to you as well.
Date: 4/3/2015 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations Richard your wonderful write being chosen poem of the day!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 9:57:00 AM
It was a very nice surprise Armand. Thanks my friend.
Date: 4/3/2015 9:13:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on Poem of the Day. Blessings dear friend well deserved
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Eve, you are so thoughtful!
Date: 4/3/2015 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD You deserve the accolades. Of course I may be prejudiced Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 9:30:00 AM
As usual??? I wish *lol*.
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Mama Bear
Date: 4/3/2015 9:27:00 AM
You are absolutely correct !!! As usual LOL
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 9:11:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks mom, love you. I think you might mean bias *lol*!
Date: 4/3/2015 8:00:00 AM
- A powerful poem, Richard - Congratulations with the title : p.o.t.d. !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 9:16:00 AM
What a great comment Eileen, I wish I could fav it. Hugs and thanks. I for one am pleased that you are enamored with words.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. Hugs back!
Date: 4/3/2015 7:41:00 AM
Richard...I saw this gaining views from the get go. First, because you're a popular poet. Second, because of the message. I'm SO proud of you. So happy to see you here...POTD! :) Your poetry and words are dear to me. I hope you never leave this place. Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/3/2015 7:54:00 AM
Yes....words are yummy enough to eat. Some words are so powerful...it's dizzying. :) I wish I wasn't SO enamored by them, but such is life...The essential words that roll off your lips are encouraging and sweet. Bless you.
Date: 4/3/2015 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations Richard for your fine selection as Poem of the Day.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Robert, sorry for the double message, I guess you were submiting at the same time I was writing to Casarah.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:26:00 AM
What a nice surprise! Thanks Cassarah. On a side note I look forward to you changing your avatar so that I once again can see your lovely face.
Date: 4/3/2015 6:55:00 AM
Of course my favorite line is "my pleasure comes, from words hot and thick" as always I am absorbed in your writing ,so very many congrats on being poem of the day, you are awesome :) :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:29:00 AM
Hi Casarah look up!
Date: 4/3/2015 5:25:00 AM
Stopping back with congratulations on poem of the day...well deserved
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:30:00 AM
I am pleasantly surprised! Thanks Tim.
Date: 4/3/2015 12:34:00 AM
Hey loved this poem Rick, so many new words for me in here to dig in and it beautifully enrich your poetry, just stop by and say hello, sorry for not joining your contest in time :(, but it inspired me to write something, come and check my page out, and can't wait to see what you think about it :p, hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Yanny, I am on my way.
Date: 4/2/2015 9:32:00 PM
Wow Richard...I am sure this poem speaks to many of us. I especially identified with your 5th stanza. This is an awesome poem! 7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:33:00 AM
Hugs and thanks Connie.
Date: 4/2/2015 10:21:00 AM
Oops sorry Richard I just meant when poets read their poetry for an audience. This a great one to hear read out loud.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:35:00 AM
No apology required! I actually participate in such an event, it is called the inspired word Cafe.
Date: 4/2/2015 10:07:00 AM
Your words do annoint and touch our hearts and souls...Have a blessed Easter.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:37:00 AM
You warm my heart Charmaine, thanks and may you be blessed as well.
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