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Behind Closed Eyes

Once sheltered from the Beaming rays of dawn, Closed eyelids view the Multi-colored hues. First seen, bright aqua Blended with chartreuse, Then divine peach which Crimson fades into. A green like no earthly Color I have seen Lingers and I am Consumed with delight, Feeling that glorious Shade penetrate Into my body and Soul’s inner sight. A spark of pink soon Appears to ignite And morphs into a fuchsia Floral bloom. . . A peaceful shade To meditate upon. Relax in Nature’s fresh air In warm sun Should you desire to bathe In rainbow’s light. Each color vibrates To a musical note And with them all, my Joyous soul takes flight. © Connie Marcum Wong Note: I wrote this poem after bathing in the sun on our deck with my eyes closed as these enchanted colors appeared.

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Lu Loo

Date: 1/31/2016 3:27:00 PM

Nature is the best medicine, isn't it! Great poem Connie! -luloo

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/3/2016 3:15:00 AM

I so agree. It changes a person's mood and is inspiring. Thank you Laura. Hugs, Connie

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/26/2016 7:04:00 AM

Lovely. This has a peaceful feeling. What a wonderful way to spend the day.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 10:01:00 PM

CONNIE, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2016 11:34:00 AM

the most beautiful things come to us at the most unexpected times relaxing can be an experience if you feel your surroundings with your soul, not your eyes... very much enjoyed this one Connie -*Luv Linda*

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/22/2016 6:31:00 AM

I agree with you Linda. Thank you very much. I appreciate you stopping by. Hugs, Connie

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/19/2016 8:25:00 AM

Sounds like someone's been in the skittles. In all seriousness, a beautiful colorful poem signifying peace.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/22/2016 6:34:00 AM

Thank you very much Daniel. Aloha, Connie

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/18/2016 6:57:00 PM

Hello Connie ... meditating with colourful thoughts can only bring on calmness within a soul - a delightful poem Connie - Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/22/2016 6:56:00 AM

It is very relaxing and inspiring which led to me writing this poem. Thanks Lindsy. Cheers, Connie

John Fleming

Date: 1/18/2016 7:11:00 AM

This really is a spectacular little poem, Connie. Such an overwhelming feeling of "Bathing in radiance"...Beautifully expressed! My very best wishes and regards to you, Connie. :) john

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/18/2016 7:11:00 PM

Thank you very much John. I have been too busy to spend much time here this holiday season. It went by so very fast. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. The best always, Connie

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/17/2016 6:54:00 PM

truly beautiful poem; i love the use of colour within poetry, and this is colourful in every way...gives me a nice peaceful feeling when reading it :)

Cona Adams

Date: 1/17/2016 3:33:00 AM

Love this, Connie. Beautifully expressed. My husband is color blind, but I'll bet he could join you in this exercise!

Daver Austin

Date: 1/16/2016 3:46:00 PM

"A green like no earthly color i've seen," This marvelous poem seems, really is, other dimensional. I know that in contemplation - when the soul leaves the body - the colors, especially the cobalt blue, circled by delicate fringe, is indescribable. Love, Dave

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2016 11:52:00 AM

I JUST LOVE THIS, Connie. I know something similar has happened to me a few times. It's so cool when it happens. You described it well.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/14/2016 10:30:00 PM

this is very unfair!!! I am sure I could write such beautiful verse too if I was in Hawaii!!!! hugs! Loved this! Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/15/2016 1:43:00 AM

I am sure you could Arthur. Are you very cold where you are? I see on the weather even Florida is having temperatures drop. Thanks so much for dropping by with your lovely comment. Blessings for a great 2016 my friend.

Elaine George

Date: 1/14/2016 6:45:00 PM

When I was a kid, I used to lie down in fields of wild flowers looking up at the sky and the clouds floating by on a bright sunny day. Then I would close my eyes and experience exactly what you have written here. Thank you for rekindling one of the most beautiful experiences I know, dear Connie.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/14/2016 11:36:00 AM

Your muse has given the page a chromatic kiss, and brought a kaleidoscope of color to life. Well written. Emile. #7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/14/2016 6:59:00 AM

Connie, what a colorful poem jumping to mesmerize me.. =`) smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/14/2016 5:37:00 AM

This is not only lovely, but something that I can relate to, Connie. I not only see the colours, but I am able to promp what colours I want! The difference between us is that it never crossed my mind to write about it, and you did! #7 Warm regards ... paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/14/2016 1:19:00 PM

Thank you very much Paul for the lovely comment. I too am able to summon colors. I work with colors, being an Aura Photographer, and each color has its own meaning. They can change your mood, make you hungry, calm your senses, excite etc. But you probably are already aware of this. Advertisers have this knowledge and use it to the hilt! Colors do inspire me. Cheers, Connie

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/14/2016 1:29:00 AM

Vibrant verse full of inspiring colours Connie.. loved to read today.. great work!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/13/2016 10:14:00 PM

A beautiful, descriptive write, Connie! Love, Kim

John Lawless

Date: 1/13/2016 6:37:00 PM

OH---YEAH----RUB IT IN CONNIE. Here in Bahstin(Boston) all I see is white....cold, icy, stinging, close your eyes and make it go away.....wintery white.....

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/13/2016 7:10:00 PM

Well in all fairness, I did write this in the summer and just found it to post. However it was pretty hot today 81 degrees. So sorry to rub it in....didn't think about that John. I actually prefer cooler weather, about 68 degrees is perfect. It gets that cool at night. I will send you some of our warm weather...thanks, Connie

White Sage

Date: 1/13/2016 6:09:00 PM

beautiful write Connie, the imagery's great

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/13/2016 7:14:00 PM

Thank you very much white sage. My computer has been running like a turtle, so I am commenting to as many as I can. Aloha, Connie