Behind Closed Doors

Heart of Gold,
calming tides
holding on, hands intertwined.

The ironman
so bold, so brave.
An injured deer
step forth to save.

No echoing groans.
No sorrowing pleas.
Hard to see what lies beneath.

There are storms and guilt, rejection, betrayal
gnawing and snapping at his core.
But doesn't let a single salty drip ever hit the floor.

This is where he hides,
Behind Closed Doors.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/16/2013 12:56:00 AM
Dear dani, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Behind Closed Doors" Vivid Picture painted here Superb PEN.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:04:00 PM
Dani . your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 6:17:00 PM
Wow, that is and awe inspiring poem, I thought it was really good.
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