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Beguiled Beauty - Win

She stands and stares in balcony Blinds me to her beguiled beauty My love for her is quite stormy She stands and stares in balcony Dark drifting clouds of agony Soft etching to art and beauty She stands and stares in balcony Blinds me to her beguiled beauty. She stands and stares in balcony Blinds me to her beguiled beauty Her hair lashes my effrontery She stands and stares in balcony Drags me down by a heart heavy Tears fall from the eyes crazy She stands and stares in balcony Blinds me to her beguiled beauty. ======================== Date 2-1-14 Form : Triolet Dr. Ram Mehta Ninth Place Win Contest: Any Poem Goes #22 by Linda

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Skat A

Date: 4/30/2014 9:26:00 PM

DR, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2014 7:15:00 PM

big congrats in Pd's contest, Dr. Ram. Nice to see this on the list.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2014 1:24:00 AM

Dr Ram, , stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA

Huberta Van Akkeren

Date: 2/15/2014 7:32:00 PM

Thank for this lovely piece...you tempt me to try writing a triolet good luck in the competition cheer Huberta

Jack Horne

Date: 2/2/2014 10:07:00 AM

lovely write on Juliet, Dr Ram

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/2/2014 8:23:00 AM

- Lovely poem "Juliet", Dr. Ram. - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/2/2014 3:58:00 AM

Great one again Dr , gl in the contest. Kayod5.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2014 10:18:00 PM

Triolets are so neat to read!! A nice form you chose for this great contest theme.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/1/2014 6:26:00 PM

What a great poem, what an amazing form. Good luck with the competition.

Chris Boskovski

Date: 2/1/2014 5:45:00 PM

Wow Dr. Ram what a very romantic and beautiful poem you have produced here. I love the repletion it adds to the poem very well! An outstanding write Dr. Ram! Good luck in the contest! :)

Daver Austin

Date: 2/1/2014 1:53:00 PM

Yes. Looking at the scene from both past and future. Good to hear from you, doctor. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/1/2014 12:20:00 PM

enticing and magical,dr. ram... the rhyme, the picture your words invoke are just wonderful... i would like to thank you for putting me on your list in your recently-concluded contest.. huggs!

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/1/2014 10:35:00 AM

You have tackled this contest brilliantly, and with a difficult form. Just beautiful, as if from days of old. Well done, Dr. Ram......lovely!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/1/2014 9:36:00 AM

You are a romantic Dr. Ram. She sounds lovely. Thanks for choosing my poem for your contest.

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/1/2014 7:19:00 AM

A form I've tried to write unsuccessfully... you seem to have it down. Lovely take on "Juliet"... nicely done !!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/1/2014 7:00:00 AM

This write is full of wondrous beauty my friend! I really loved reading this wonderful poem here this morning! What a terrific piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!