Beginnings

Innocent ears… catch the gentle scrape of nylon against nylon Innocent eyes… catch a flash of garter Right knee over left The simple motion of legs crossing She catches me looking She is older than me She glances down She glances back up She tugs her lower lip and smiles at me…

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 8:36:00 PM

Tim, cute one.... . Hugs* SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/15/2014 6:47:00 AM

Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, Tim

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/15/2013 5:16:00 AM

subtly sensual, one of those snapshot moments, a fond memory, perhaps(?) I see it was a winner in the contest, so congrats...and thanks for your sweet comments on my birthday blog and poem, very kind! I hadn't heard of that film you mentioned, but it sounds interesting...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2013 8:17:00 AM

Passionate win..Congrats..Sara

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/2/2013 10:10:00 PM

I loved it Tim. Many warm congrats for the win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2013 9:22:00 PM

Tim, ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ Linda

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/2/2013 7:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/2/2013 7:54:00 AM

Me likes! Congratulations Tim.

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 1:39:00 PM

Tim, a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT ~

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/1/2013 12:23:00 PM

Wow... this is sensational soft and sensual seduction... a perfect portrait on this theme... well done and congratulations on your win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2013 6:53:00 AM

- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Tim! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/28/2013 10:09:00 PM

Softly sensual indeed. Your gentle side is so .... gentle and very telling of your sensual side. Off to faves to check often. I've got to practice those moves. Licia ^__*

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/27/2013 7:06:00 PM

the images come to life...one can see her there...sensual and well written, good luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2013 5:20:00 PM

wow, this is AWESOME!!!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/26/2013 11:39:00 AM

Good writing Tim! Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2013 9:23:00 AM

love this clever and very sensual write, Tim. A sure winner

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/26/2013 6:11:00 AM

Wow, this IS quite a sensual write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! Quite a fantastic piece, what a masterful poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2013 5:34:00 AM

- Romantic and soft .... love it. - Good luck in the contest! - (Read my suggestion: "Unkissed Lips") - Have a nice day, my friend Tim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/26/2013 5:29:00 AM

:) Very very sensual indeed. Great write!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/26/2013 2:00:00 AM

wow this is so visual, and food for the imagination..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2013 12:19:00 AM

A nice character sketch in words you have drawn , Tim