Beginnings

Innocent ears…
catch the gentle scrape
of nylon against nylon
Innocent eyes…
catch a flash of garter
Right knee over left
The simple motion
of legs crossing

She catches me looking
She is older than me
She glances down 
She glances back up
She tugs her lower lip
and smiles at me…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Tim, cute one.... . Hugs* SKAT
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:47 AM
Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, Tim
Puddifoot Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 5:16 AM
subtly sensual, one of those snapshot moments, a fond memory, perhaps(?) I see it was a winner in the contest, so congrats...and thanks for your sweet comments on my birthday blog and poem, very kind! I hadn't heard of that film you mentioned, but it sounds interesting...
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Passionate win..Congrats..Sara
Mannan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 10:10 PM
I loved it Tim. Many warm congrats for the win.
A   Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Tim, ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ Linda
Morgan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Me likes! Congratulations Tim.
A  Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:39 PM
Tim, a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT ~
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Wow... this is sensational soft and sensual seduction... a perfect portrait on this theme... well done and congratulations on your win :)
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 6:53 AM
- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Tim! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hendricks Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Softly sensual indeed. Your gentle side is so .... gentle and very telling of your sensual side. Off to faves to check often. I've got to practice those moves. Licia ^__*
Adams Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 7:06 PM
the images come to life...one can see her there...sensual and well written, good luck in the contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:20 PM
wow, this is AWESOME!!!!
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 11:39 AM
Good writing Tim! Light & Love
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:23 AM
love this clever and very sensual write, Tim. A sure winner
Sivey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:11 AM
Wow, this IS quite a sensual write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! Quite a fantastic piece, what a masterful poem, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:34 AM
- Romantic and soft .... love it. - Good luck in the contest! - (Read my suggestion: "Unkissed Lips") - Have a nice day, my friend Tim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:29 AM
:) Very very sensual indeed. Great write!
Horsman Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 2:00 AM
wow this is so visual, and food for the imagination..
Mehta Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:19 AM
A nice character sketch in words you have drawn , Tim
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