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There is a white dot. I lie on my back inside it. White walls rise everywhere Around me and above my head. There has been a noise That now is silent. The cessation is a clear Cleaving of time into Sound, no sound. I remember a hollow echo Lingering in an open place. The air is thin and clear and cool. There is an absence. I try again to lift my head; It is too big and too heavy. I am empty. I am nothing. Only the dot remains.

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Date: 9/26/2022 9:22:00 AM
Especially love your free verse - your mind wonders into interesting rooms
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Date: 8/21/2022 12:13:00 PM
this is a very intriguing write enjoyed reading it..
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/21/2022 2:51:00 PM
Yolanda, I'm glad you liked this. Your comment led me to have a look at your work. I'm new here and jusy getting my bearings. You are definitely a fav. Remarkable poems, so full of image and feeling, they brim over! Elizabeth
Date: 8/19/2022 10:51:00 PM
Intriguing and fascinating, besides writing great poetry, you are a philosopher also. You are almost like a artist, your poem has an abstract flair - great write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/20/2022 3:36:00 PM
So kind, Jennifer. I am overwhelmed by your work but also by the welcoming you and others have shown to my poems late emergence from a kitchen drawer! Thank you! Elizabeth
Date: 8/17/2022 6:42:00 PM
Fascinating, Elizabeth. Quite an impressive piece, methinks. ~ Gershon
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/18/2022 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. When I write something unusual I always worry that it won't work; nobody will get it. So I'm doubly appreciative for your response, both here and for "Just Wading." Your kindness... Elizabeth

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