Begin Anew

mornings sometimes, too soon come, thank God for hope (blood) that part of my day I take Home planet holds wonders, dark ambitions, too could we forget the abused child? the spurned woman, mother? God weeps blood tears returns

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 4/15/2017 1:14:00 PM

Beautiful words indeed , hugs / / :)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 4/13/2017 3:03:00 AM

Dear christian mother :) Thank u for writing unto our God's glory. He reigns forever. thank u also for ur divinely inspirational comments on my poems. i love u ma, but it's a good goodnews that Jesus loves u more.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 3:39:00 PM

-- Smile -- right back at you thank you

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 3:02:00 PM

Good Afternoon Anil. This is spiritual in every way. How timely during this Holy week and what it means. May all begin anew with a fresh of everything. I enjoyed your inspiration and positiveness even through your words of those in need for none of them should be forgotten. Well done

Anil Deo
Date: 4/12/2017 3:11:00 PM

You do think and care for everybody, and read expertly between the lines. Wisdom is one so young .... (s MIL e):

Anil Deo

Date: 4/12/2017 1:49:00 PM

Dear Readers, thank you. Need to recharge my computer. Will be back. Blessings and shalom

Destiny Lawson

Date: 4/12/2017 10:07:00 AM

This is very inspirational and lifted my spirits to anew. I love it very much and would love to read more. Keep writing and expressing yourself! :)

Anil Deo
Date: 4/12/2017 3:09:00 PM

Destiny Lawson, you could be Encourager-in-Chief; I really appreciate your visit. I read something of your's that told me you & others here love poetry & write superbly. I am reworking new & old thoughts, notes, ideas. Shalom, Anil

Phil Capitano

Date: 4/12/2017 7:46:00 AM

Excellent write Anil, the new day brings new hope for peace; being thankful is the first breath of awareness. Namaste.

Anil Deo
Date: 4/12/2017 3:07:00 PM

Phil you are a Captain of Poetry and encouragement, too. Shalom Friend and Poet. Anil

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/12/2017 7:04:00 AM

Anil, this is a very powerful and moving poem that speaks of the cycle of violence tearing us apart but it also reminds us that the 'planet holds wonders'. I wish we were not so blind and moved by 'dark ambitions':) A heartfelt 7 Amitiés

Anil Deo
Date: 4/12/2017 7:34:00 AM

Anne-Marie, you made it a wonderful start to the day. (A dear aunt is ailing ... and I did not sleep well) But I wish to keep the twin disciplines of (i) Always thanking our Good God for so many blessings, and a new day (ii) Praying for others, and then my main concern/s, with trust. Shalom & Blessings galore are in store if we adore the Lord who wishes to be close, not far & o'er.