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Befuddled

in the middle it all muddles like warm milk that is now curdled once it cuddled all soft and swaddled no longer a rhyme, no, more a riddle a heart that somehow becomes raddled a canoe adrift without the paddles a bucking horse without a saddle a losing team that needs a huddle in the midst a great big puddle it was always a losing battle all it does is squeak and rattle all of this leaving me befuddled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/11/2010 9:40:00 AM
well done J.b., a Pleasure to have reading your work this fine day. Enjoyed you flowing Rhymes, i like the way you stuck with one ending rhyme to do the whole write,..p.d
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