Before the Technology Took-Over

BEFORE THE TECHNOLOGY TOOK OVER.

How beautiful were those days 
When tech had not touched us
To spoil our minds and hearts
When life was simple and plain
And ambitions too were not very rosy.

When poetry music and art 
Use to inspire us to touch the sky
On the wings of our imagination
As then our dreams too were simple 
And love use to empower our hearts
To swim across any deep ocean
While singing the songs of love.

When television had not snatched
Our leisure hours from everyone of us 
And we use to dance and sing
On the call of heart touching tunes.

When mobiles had not spoiled our minds
While snatching from us, 
Our peace of mind  
When computers were a remote cry 
And internet had not ruined the purity of minds.

When as children we use to enjoy the life
While playing the Gend Tadi* (throw balls)
Or even the Gilli Danda* 
As they all use to fill us with a serene joy
Which the new technology has snatched 
From our kids and younger generations.

How beautiful were those days
When we use to enjoy the company
Of human minds and hearts
Unlike the numerous appliances 
Which we keep close to our hearts
instead of love, music and friendship.

The new generation would never know
The beauty of those precious joyous moments
Which used to embrace our hearts 
And were the result of love and affection
Which always come from non tech things.

Ravindra K Kapoor 
Kanpir India 29th Oct. 2016

Inspired poem from a Photo published by Julia Ward on face book.
   
* Indian village simple games which are played with the help of a rubber ball and two wooden made Gilli  two side conical small rod and Danda ( a little bigger rod).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/24/2019 4:30:00 PM
Dear Ravindra K Kapoor First of all, how beautiful this poem is, I admire every letter you wrote, I'm writing this to tell you I am a filmmaker student and I would like to show your poem out there to people along with beautiful visuals related to the subject.
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Date: 12/27/2020 8:14:00 AM
I am extremely sorry dear friend Shahad Abonomaik for missing your message on my email and a long absence from Poetry Soup. If this poem can be any use for you I have no objection if you want to use it in any film or video but kindly mention my name also if it is possible. If you are face book I would love add U as a friend as I am more active on fb nowdays . wbw Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 9/24/2019 4:29:00 PM
Mr, Ravindra I'm asking for your permission to use your amazing poem in a short film as a voice-over, and if you like to do the voice-over it would be even better. It is strictly for non-profit use and is being used for my portfolio. I would be thankful for your permission and if you don't wish for it then I will not do so. Thank you for your time best regards, Shahad Abonomai
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Date: 1/24/2018 2:52:00 PM
Beautiful write depicting the harsh reality! Reminds me of " kagaz ki kashti barish ka pani" by jagjit singh ji!
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Date: 1/28/2018 11:01:00 PM
Thanks Mansi for liking the poem. Sorry I am not very regular on PS and also on yahoo mail due to which I missed your comment. I welcome you as a new member of Poetry Soup from India. Here you would meet wonderful poets and their beautiful non ending poems from all over the world. I will visit your page soon Mansi. If you are face book you can join me like others. With best wishes....
Date: 11/7/2016 12:04:00 PM
Mr Kapoor, Very nice creation. It is a high level poem. Superb thought & brilliant work out. loved it............//hugs
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Date: 10/31/2016 6:44:00 PM
Ravindra I feel being a baby boomer, I have had the best of both worlds. I love TV, but growing up , we did so many fun things as groups and as family. So I have been able to enjoy both technology and REAL communication. Nothing like the good old days as this poem implies.
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Date: 11/1/2016 4:45:00 AM
Thanks Andrea 4 your kind words. Both you & me are really very fortunate we have experienced the beauty of those golden days when technology had occupied the major parts of our hearts & simple things use to fill us with the joys of life. But when we see the majority of today’s youth we find them too busy to care for human values. May be we are old now and this is called the generation gap. L&BW
Date: 10/31/2016 6:44:00 PM
How cool that Julia WArd's picture inspired you here.
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Date: 11/1/2016 4:46:00 AM
Shall be visiting your page soon. WBW
Date: 10/30/2016 9:39:00 AM
Looking back = yes kinda sad the modern unsociety. Love, daver
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Date: 10/30/2016 1:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments dear friend. More soon on your page. Love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 10/29/2016 11:11:00 PM
Of course technology brings us both good and bad, is merely a tool, any tool has to be used appropriately! However I love this poem, is a point I often make, and this video I think sums it up! hope you like it! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VASywEuqFd8
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Date: 10/30/2016 6:18:00 AM
You are absolutely right dear friend Arthur. Thank you so much for liking the poem. I have watched your beautiful video and have found very interestingly that it too conveys very affectively what I was trying to find in my poem missing in our life because of new technology. More on your page soon ...WBW
Date: 10/29/2016 11:37:00 AM
I so love your poem Ravindra my friend. I think this generation is missing out on so much. The world has become dehumanized. A fav...I will have to go look at the picture.
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Date: 10/30/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend Tim for your kind appreciation and liking the Poem. You are very right the world has become dehumanized. We know that without technology even having the pleasure of seeing your precious words would not have occurred but with every new technology we have lost some or the other God gifted qualities. More on your page soon. WBW
Date: 10/29/2016 10:32:00 AM
I have composed this poem as a result of a reaction on a Photo published by Julia ward on face book. So thanks to my friend Julia Ward. With best wishes....Ravindra K Kapoor
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