Before the Sun Sets

The sun set with a golden glow the day on which you I met
 On that special  walk in the beautiful  park as the sun set

The sun set a glowing red as I walked with no threat
Amongst the trees of different hues as the sun set

The sun set slowly going down dropping, to it I'm indebt
To enjoying every minute of color as slowly the sun set

The sun set quietly didn't say a word but drew
Others to come in and watch closely as the sun set

The sun sets for you and me my handsome dear
Come close lets get all we can from life before fully the sun sets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Lovely piece on the sunset Sara, a delightful read. Thank you so much for your always kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
Butler Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 10:25 AM
A very gentle and sweet poem, Sara. I enjoyed this very much. -Mike
Culverhouse Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 7:44 AM
so sweet!! I had a tear in my eye!! Love yall!!
Ajith Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 1:38 AM
through the sun set ur message is wonderful that to go and enjoy life to the full length before it gets finished.keep writing. take care
Strand Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 11:48 PM
Very visual and memrable Sara,one of your best,and one for tht favourites,like the 'kyrielle' flavour .Rgds Brian
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June 22, 2010 at 2:42 PM
reminds me of how very beautiful & breathtaking my own sunsets can be. and even before the sun sets. im sure your dear looks all the more handsome in the setting of the sun. ~Always&Forever
Muzzey Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 8:25 AM
A lovely write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Flach Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Sara, beautiful write. My soup mail to you referred to an item it appears you have now fixed. Joe
Fone Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 5:11 AM
love sunsets myself Sara, they are always a wonderful source of inspiration aren't they?, lovely piece, June x
Mehta Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:53 AM
A nice thoughts about the loved one on sunset
Clark Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:30 AM
Awwwwww, so tender and beautiful!!! A daily reminder! Check last couplet, missing sun??? Love Jeralynn
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