Before the Shakers Seat,

Good early intent

echo of upright morals 

subtle shaded later days

(reality counts)

in debt and in pride

shadowed  regret and sadness

For the contest  chair in a shadowed room, by Rick parise


Copyright Joe Maverick 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 18, 2012 at 9:43 PM
JOE, reality is all that matters... stopping by to say hi... wondering about you.... have yourself a good night~ always*PD
Anish Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Are you familiat with the song "Let Your song be Simple" - it is a Shaker song. Nice work. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
Wesley Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 9:17 PM
You provide just enough words to shake the imagination and hint at the story. I love the way you dealt with the subject.
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading this one..I remember that contest..It has been a long while back...Thanks for stopping by, reading , and commenting on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Just saw your last comments to me. Yeah, I have no clue what the other thing wrong with me is. Also i got a frozen shoulder from that surgery. The exercises Doc gave me did not do the trick and I just started therapy. Talk about painful. GEEEEZ. Maybe two months from now I can figure out the other dang thing I was writing about! OK, go now and POST.
Anish Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 7:39 PM
I have always found the Shakers interesting and find your poem evocative. Who is Rick Parise? Yours Matthew Anish
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Thanks for your comment, Joe. Had the MRI today and should get the results Monday or Tuesday at the latest. Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:15 PM
i thought i had read this one, but guess not, sorry didn't because this was a wonderful piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on warm Breezes.
Phookan Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Awesome piece of poetry I found today. Many Congrats on your wonderful win Joe...gautami
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Great win in the comp mate, Subtle shaded later days (have them ok):) deep write, delight. I say on ya mate, Don
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in ^Rick Parise's "Chair In A Shadowed Room" contest Joe. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:38 PM
yes we saw the same "forced" form...congrad's on your win too! Light & Love
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Wow a really nice write Joe.Thanks for all your kind comments and lovely congrats you send.I'm only able to write one comment for the several you send cause i only have one finger to type with but read them all.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Dufresne Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:32 AM
you stacked this chair full of excellent poetic lines and thoughts, Joe. Be proud of your win. It's well deserved for sure.
Mac Donald Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joe! A very profound write seated "in a shadowed room". Still, a stream of light and guidance emanates from your words. Well thought out and composed!! Best wishes to you and yours...Mikki
Sweetheart Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 9:09 PM
wow Joe way to go ..congrats on your big win in Rick;s contest with this wonderful creation my friend...luv..
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:12 PM
A HUGE congratulations to you, Joe. It was a really good one!
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 6:31 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of rick, Joe
Henderson Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 12:39 AM
Sometimes the ball does seem to know how it bounces doesn't it.
Devonshire Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 12:22 PM
I love the transition from the hopeful man with upright morals to one who dwells in the shadowed regret of debt and pride, Joe. Awesome entry for Rick's contest. It's so good to see you posting new work. Best wishes for success with this gem! Love, Carolyn
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June 5, 2011 at 9:45 PM
You know what, it DOES look like that kind of a chair, for shakers,yes, I can see it, Joe. HEy did you see the poem Don wrote for ya? Or at ya I guess. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Very aptly read and well interpreted the picture in the contetst, Joe
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 11:41 AM
a very reflective write, joe... subtle in its poetic strength... best wishes with huggs..:) nette
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