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Before the Rains

                 Blue blankets
                  darken, announcing 
              opening of the skies,
            downpour ~ first one tear from the farmer -
             revealed by peacock's dance...   Rain,
            impending.  These are
               Nature's  signs.

Septet II

Copyright © Sneha Rv | Year Posted 2015

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Nandita Das Date: 6/8/2015 1:14:00 PM Excellent. Congratulations on your win. I remember a movie, "Before the rains"... in which my namesake Nandita Das played the protagonist. :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/6/2015 11:23:00 PM Sneha, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT** Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/6/2015 11:01:00 PM Lovely imagery, Sneha! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Judy Konos Date: 6/6/2015 8:46:00 PM You paint with words, beautiful words Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 6/6/2015 3:15:00 PM Well done Sneha, a vibrant picture painted with your words. Congrats on the win Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/6/2015 1:17:00 PM beautiful poem from a beautiful girl. Congrats for your fine win. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/6/2015 10:15:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats you have an outstanding talent my friend:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/6/2015 9:49:00 AM As Sandra has said below, you painted the picture just perfectly !! Congratulations Sneha! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 6/6/2015 9:46:00 AM What a lovely verbal painting you created, Sneha. Congratulations on our fine win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/6/2015 9:31:00 AM Hi Sneha! So pleased to be back with congratulations; yours is a very merited win! // paul Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/6/2015 8:23:00 AM Congrats on a fine win Sneha Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 5/25/2015 7:02:00 AM What a picturesque sketch of Rains with the dance of peacock adding more colors in your Rain's paintings. Beautiful lines and a creative work. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you once again for your Vote after going through my Blog for my Short film. It's good surprise from a new PS friend. I would come back on your poem a little later. Are you from India? Love and best wishes always Sneha....Ravindra K Kapoor Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/25/2015 8:45:00 AM Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it. Yes, I am from India :D

Kelly Deschler Date: 5/21/2015 2:26:00 PM I really enjoyed your poem's unique imagery in lovely shades of blue. Very nicely written, Sneha! Good luck in Nette's contest! Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/21/2015 8:37:00 PM Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! SO happy you liked it :D

Kash Poet Date: 5/17/2015 3:56:00 AM Wow!Amazing....got to read more of your poems. Best wishes. Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/17/2015 4:06:00 AM Thank you so much!! :D :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/17/2015 2:58:00 AM lovely metAphor use... a7~olive elois Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/17/2015 4:05:00 AM Thanks a lot!! :D :D

Emile Pinet Date: 5/16/2015 12:36:00 PM You imagery is top notch and brings life to your words. Emile. Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/16/2015 1:17:00 PM Thank you so much!! :D :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/15/2015 11:03:00 PM oohhhh, the peacock's dance was a nice touch in there. GREAT going, Sneha!!! Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 5/15/2015 8:36:00 PM Such beauty in this verse, Sneha. A 7. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/15/2015 8:41:00 PM Thank you so much!! :D :D

Jan Allison Date: 5/15/2015 2:20:00 PM Wow what a creative take on the theme Sneha and i too didn't know about peacocks dancing - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/15/2015 8:08:00 PM Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it! :D :D

Paul Callus Date: 5/15/2015 11:20:00 AM This is lovely and creative, Sneha. I know that Red Indians used to do a rain dance, but did not realize that peacocks did one as well! gl in the contest. // paul Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/15/2015 11:27:00 AM Thank you so much!! Yes, peacocks dance in the rain. So happy you liked it!! Thank you :D

Judy Konos Date: 5/15/2015 10:18:00 AM She speaks....and we are in wonderment...thank you ...very lovely... Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/15/2015 10:21:00 AM Thank you so much, dear Judy!! :D :D

Nandita Das Date: 5/15/2015 10:17:00 AM Love to watch peacock dance in the rain. An excellent sign. Well written. Looking forward to see this on the winners list. 7 Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/15/2015 10:21:00 AM Thanks a lot, dear Nandita!! I appreciate you taking time to comment on my poems!! :D :D