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Before the Rains

Blue blankets darken, announcing opening of the skies, downpour ~ first one tear from the farmer - revealed by peacock's dance... Rain, impending. These are Nature's signs. Septet II

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Nandita Das

Date: 6/8/2015 1:14:00 PM

Excellent. Congratulations on your win. I remember a movie, "Before the rains"... in which my namesake Nandita Das played the protagonist. :)

Skat A

Date: 6/6/2015 11:23:00 PM

Sneha, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/6/2015 11:01:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Sneha! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

Judy Konos

Date: 6/6/2015 8:46:00 PM

You paint with words, beautiful words

John Lawless

Date: 6/6/2015 3:15:00 PM

Well done Sneha, a vibrant picture painted with your words. Congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2015 1:17:00 PM

beautiful poem from a beautiful girl. Congrats for your fine win.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2015 10:15:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats you have an outstanding talent my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/6/2015 9:49:00 AM

As Sandra has said below, you painted the picture just perfectly !! Congratulations Sneha!

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/6/2015 9:46:00 AM

What a lovely verbal painting you created, Sneha. Congratulations on our fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 6/6/2015 9:31:00 AM

Hi Sneha! So pleased to be back with congratulations; yours is a very merited win! // paul

Joseph May

Date: 6/6/2015 8:23:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Sneha

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/25/2015 7:02:00 AM

What a picturesque sketch of Rains with the dance of peacock adding more colors in your Rain's paintings. Beautiful lines and a creative work. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you once again for your Vote after going through my Blog for my Short film. It's good surprise from a new PS friend. I would come back on your poem a little later. Are you from India? Love and best wishes always Sneha....Ravindra K Kapoor

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/25/2015 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it. Yes, I am from India :D

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/21/2015 2:26:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem's unique imagery in lovely shades of blue. Very nicely written, Sneha! Good luck in Nette's contest!

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/21/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! SO happy you liked it :D

Kash Poet

Date: 5/17/2015 3:56:00 AM

Wow!Amazing....got to read more of your poems. Best wishes.

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/17/2015 4:06:00 AM

Thank you so much!! :D :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/17/2015 2:58:00 AM

lovely metAphor use... a7~olive elois

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/17/2015 4:05:00 AM

Thanks a lot!! :D :D

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/16/2015 12:36:00 PM

You imagery is top notch and brings life to your words. Emile.

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/16/2015 1:17:00 PM

Thank you so much!! :D :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2015 11:03:00 PM

oohhhh, the peacock's dance was a nice touch in there. GREAT going, Sneha!!!

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/15/2015 8:36:00 PM

Such beauty in this verse, Sneha. A 7. Good luck in the contest!

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thank you so much!! :D :D

Jan Allison

Date: 5/15/2015 2:20:00 PM

Wow what a creative take on the theme Sneha and i too didn't know about peacocks dancing - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2015 8:08:00 PM

Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it! :D :D

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2015 11:20:00 AM

This is lovely and creative, Sneha. I know that Red Indians used to do a rain dance, but did not realize that peacocks did one as well! gl in the contest. // paul

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2015 11:27:00 AM

Thank you so much!! Yes, peacocks dance in the rain. So happy you liked it!! Thank you :D

Judy Konos

Date: 5/15/2015 10:18:00 AM

She speaks....and we are in wonderment...thank you ...very lovely...

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2015 10:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Judy!! :D :D

Nandita Das

Date: 5/15/2015 10:17:00 AM

Love to watch peacock dance in the rain. An excellent sign. Well written. Looking forward to see this on the winners list. 7

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2015 10:21:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Nandita!! I appreciate you taking time to comment on my poems!! :D :D