Before the Night-ITQ

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Landscape View Of Mountains Under Cloudy Blue Sky Near Ocean And ...

Before the day turned into night A nascent sun, spun brilliant light. A vast kaleidoscope alight Nature's tinted hues soothing sight. Romance true nature, appeasing Soul with its eyes and voice, pleasing True aphrodisiac teasing Even for a moment squeezing. Then, slowly drawing a deep breath, Parting footprints the daytime hath Said, its turquoise depth parting death. Mourn the day, single shibboleth. Rhythm poetics feel to begin, Fervor whisper snore from within. 1/30/2024

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2024 2:15:00 PM

Hey. I am trying to recall whose challenge this was. I can't find a poem. Of mine with itq after it

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2024 12:01:00 PM

Splendid images weaved with emotions-- a wonderful poem, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2024 11:03:00 PM

Wow stunning work and one of the best I have seen in this challenge

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/31/2024 1:36:00 AM

This poem is such a poetic journey, dear Eve, exploring vivid realms of emotions, your lines travel from the radiance of 'nascent sun' and reach the 'parting footprints of daytime' .. So impeccably you've infused heartfelt feelings here with brilliant wordsmithery and painted an enchanting imagery which truly stirs the soul, in many ways.. I especially loved "True aphrodisiac teasing", "its turquoise depth parting death", "Rhythm poetics feel to begin" Absolutely stunning!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/31/2024 7:02:00 AM

Thank you for your compliment, Hiya. Your word of encouragement warms my heart. Hugs and many blessings

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/30/2024 10:54:00 PM

Incredibly beautiful. Wonderful imagery. I love this poem. It brings out the best of you. Hugs.