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Before the Gates of Alahsar - Version - 2 - 9

Now, once more, the mists of time, they close over DreamScape. the vision, now gone, yet soon the vision shall return, Once again, DreamScape shall open. The tale, it shall sing again, soon, the son of the storm, the Dak Man, he shall be h be there soon, the song shall live, now, my thoughts must focus, our tale shall progress, the song of Alahsar is just paused, there is much more to be told. Chapter..........1..........Part..........1..........5. Now let us return my Lords and Ladies, golden Alahsar awaits, the mists of time once more dissipate, glory comes to us once more, come, let us soar on high, the song of Alahsar comes forth, Charge the horns, we return to the ancient jewel, Alahsar. Now, mighty ones, let us return to the mighty storm, majestic terror does sing in Alahsar's skies, This is but a mother. sending forth her beloved son the son of the storm, now, ready to descend to the earth. The storm does roar and roar again, its ultimate fury, unabating, It does rock Alahsar's skies, fury's circle in fury's dance, This storm shall cause no damage, The mother calls forth her son, her voice is deafening. Now, all Alahsar watches the storm, glory and honour to the Dark Man, when he comes, exultation, come now from Valhallah, Dark Man, son of the storm. Mighty the cheer, voices raised to the sky, down on a lightning bolt, black unicorn does descend, Turvehr, the king of unicorns, the mount of the Dark Man, giant, raven's wings held in at his sides, A great power is Turvehr. The horn of his power, black majesty, the most wondrous of mythical creatures, down the lightning bolt, glory and power descending, The Dark Man, he sits proud on Turvehr's back. The Dark Man, his true form, only ever seen by one mortal, One pair of soft, brown eyes, they alone know his majesty, Dressed in black, from head to foot, completely covered, a huge Cowal does cover his head, his face never seen. No flesh at all, ever seen, only one shall ever know his true form. The Tigress. the one, she never speaks of what she knows, the son of the Gods, the son of the storm, he has now come. Alahsar's greatest protector, he is now come, this is the night of nights. To Be Continued...........

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Date: 12/5/2019 10:23:00 PM
I would like to thank all those who have dropped by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/8/2019 8:47:00 AM
- Mike my friend, I think you should do these stories to something BIG ... something really BIG !!! ... I think of a book first ... and then maybe a movie - You are really talented ... believe in yourself - "Poetry Soup is just a drop in the ocean" - Have a wonderful weekend ... (winter has come to Norway ... brrrr. cold :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/8/2019 8:10:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Once I have completed the third and final version of Alahsar, I shall then decide what to do with it. I must admit, I am enjoying writing the piece. It is cold here in Scotland also. Have a wonderful Saturday Anne-Lise. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 11/7/2019 11:09:00 AM
Brilliant Mike, I have read some of your episodes, but will try to now read and follow the characters, as do our fellow poets, I think you are enormously creative my friend - poetic gems are what you produce - loved this installment! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/8/2019 7:40:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am getting such enjoyment out of Alahsar. The journey continues. Have a wonderful Saturday when it comes. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 11/7/2019 7:53:00 AM
Hey! Mikey-we likey...exceptional epic endeavors my friend...only VR can do...we crave for more...^WW^ :o)
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/8/2019 7:17:00 PM
Hi WW, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am getting such enjoyment out of writing this epic piece. The song still sings in my mind. Have a wonderful Saturday when it comes. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 11/6/2019 9:18:00 AM
You amaze me, I don’t know how you keep all the characters straight. Another wonderful instalment. Blessings Ric.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/8/2019 6:17:00 PM
Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you like the piece. I always get such enjoyment out of writing this piece. The journey continues. Have a wonderful saturday when the time comes. Blessings....Mike.
Date: 11/6/2019 2:52:00 AM
Truly an EPIC...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/19/2019 12:59:00 AM
You are always welcome... is it going to get finished??
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/8/2019 5:57:00 PM
Hi Pashang, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I get such enjoyment out of writing this epic. Part - 1. has come to an end. The journey continues. Have a wonderful Saturday when it comes. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 11/5/2019 8:45:00 PM
Write on, Mike. I have really 'gotten into' the characters now, and am eager to read the next installment. Thank YOU! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 11/8/2019 5:21:00 PM
Hi Gershon, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad that you like the piece. I have always wanted to write this piece since I was young. I am enjoying the process. Have a wonderful Saturday when it comes. Your friend....Mike.

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